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Then I just had one past-time work experience in last year of summer vacation. I worked in Yieh Phui Enterprise company of production planning devision. It let me to learn that how to revolve in one company and how to communicate with colleague etc. My personality is more introvert so I want to look for one stable job like civil servant after graduation. Besides, I also would like to work at correlated financial job upon graduation. After five years, I will be what term of my profession is hard to answer. I think maybe I still be one general position or maybe I will have opportunity to be one administrator. I only expect to acquit myself of a duty in my task.

The advantages of such assignments is that let me to learn how to discuss with other and express my idea on group. In addition to reading, the disadvantages of such assignments is that sometimes have difference on group.

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    1 0 年前
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    I had one part-time work experience in the last summer vacation.

    I worked in Yieh Phui Enterprise, in the Production and Planning Division. I have improved my communication skills and my understanding of the daily operating activities of the company has greatly increased. I am a more reserved person, I would like to work under the government as a civil servant after I graduate.

    On the other hand, I would also like to work in a correlated financial company after graduation. It is hard to predict where I would be in five years time along my professional development. Perhaps a general position or perhaps I might be promoted to an administrator. I expect myself to complete my own responsibilities in the best way possible. The advantage of such assignment is that it allows me to learn how to express my own ideas in a group and improve my communication skill with others. In addition to reading, the disadvantage of such assignment is that there are irresolvable differences that would always appear in the group, which is unavoidable.

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  • 1 0 年前

    Then I just had one past-time work experience in last year of summer vacation. I worked in Yuen Phi Enterprise Company of production planning division. It let me to learn that how to revolve in one company and how to communicate with colleague etc. My personality is more introvert so I want to look for one stable job like civil servant after graduation. Besides, I also would like to work at correlated financial job upon graduation. After five years, I will be what term of my profession is hard to answer. I think maybe I still am one general position or maybe I will have opportunity to be one administrator. I only expect to acquit myself of a duty in my task.

    The advantages of such assignments is that let me to learn how to discuss with other and express my idea on group. In addition to reading, the disadvantages of such assignments are that sometimes have difference on group.

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