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Peoples brain would produce thier own natural drug, a kind of natural

chemical which could act like a drug, the effectiveness could as strong

as real madicines.

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    1. Peoples brain

    誤: 許多人只有一個brain. Peoples brain可改成The human brain.

    2. produce their own natural drug

    誤: 前面的主詞是單數brain, 不應用their.

    3. ... act like a drug, the effectiveness could as strong as real madicines.

    誤: 少了一個連接詞連接後面這一句. 這一句有助V但沒有原V.

    可改成 ... act like a drug, the effectiveness of which could be as strong ...

    或獨立成句 ... act like a drug. The effectiveness of it could be as strong ...

    加上小錯誤修正後:

    The human brain would produce its own natural drug, a kind of natural chemical which could act like a drug, the effectiveness of which could be as strong as real medicine.

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