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請問英文高手 英文改錯問題

一.

speeding offenders will be hined for NT$1200 wo NT$2400 and penalized for one demerit point.

(B)speeding offences are liable to fines of NT$1200 wo NT$2400 and penalty of one demerit point.

超速者將處新台幣NT$1200到NT$2400的罰款並記一點.

請問上述中a對或者是b對 a b 有什麼不同?

二.

According to the college's rules, instructors can, but do not have, fail

students for poor classroom attendance.

請問這句話的句意是什麼 but do not have那邊是不是有文法錯誤

三.

With their adult children left home, David and Susan decided to sell their house, although they really liked it

這題是改錯提 答案錯的地方在left 可是可不可以把with改成when而

left 不改呢

四.

The first Winter Olympic Game held 1924 in Chamonix, France,and

consisted of 16 events that depended on the winter weather

請問句意思

這提也是改錯題 答案給的地方是held 可是held 前不是省略which was 這樣不是也可以通嗎?

呼呼就這樣了 謝謝大家的協助

已更新項目:

fined for amount from NT$1200 to NT$2400 and ....

fines of amount from NT$1200 to NT$2400 and

不好意思這個地方筆誤 wo 改成to

還有第一題

兩個題目可以給完整的中文意思嗎 謝謝

第二題 如果硬要在 but do not have 的地方改要怎麼改

第四題如果整句語意不改的話 held 在裡面是不是文法錯誤

要怎麼改哩 謝謝大家

3 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    (A) Speeding offenders will be fined for NT$1200 wo

    NT$2400 and penalized for one demerit point.

    (B) Speeding offences are liable to fines of NT$1200 wo NT$2400

    and penalty of one demerit point.

    我認為二句文法都對, 只是表達方式不同.

    A句是以對等PP動詞fined and penalized來表示

    所以fined及penalized後面接的都是主格補語

    是因為主格使用了offenders 違規的人 (人物)

    B句是以對等名詞來表示

    Fines of …及 penalty of …都是名詞片語, 也屬主格補語

    因為主格是用事情 offences/offenses 指違規這個事實

    故當以offences/offense當主詞時, 後面的補語用名詞片語

    ----------------------------------------------------------

    先拿掉 but do not have, 這句子變為:

    According to the college's rules, instructors can fail

    students for poor classroom attendance.

    意思為 根據校方規定, 教練可以評定學生的低出席率

    當在can and fail中間加入一句, but do not have,

    並以 逗號 隔開, 表示教練並未依規定做出評定出席率很差一事

    這樣的寫法, 比較較 強調 意味

    也可如此表達:

    Instructors can fail students for poor classroom attendance

    according to the college s rules. Actually instructors

    don t follow up the rules. 或者

    Although instructors can fail students for poor classroom attendance

    According to the college s rules, they don’t follow it up.

    英文的寫法可以很多種, 只要用對意思及文法即可

    ----------------------------------------------------------

    With their adult children left home, David and Susan decided to

    sell their house, although they really liked it.

    坦白說 這句有點怪 原意應是:

    因為(with)孩子去世時, 他們雖然很喜歡房子但仍決定要賣掉房子

    去世 用 left沒錯, 只是應該是: With their adult children left,..(拿掉home)

    如果是用when, 那麼意思變成: 離開這個家哦

    When their children are leaving home…,

    ---------------------------------

    The first Winter Olympic Game was held 1924 in Chamonix, France,and

    consisted of 16 events that depended on the winter weather.

    原意是指:

    首屆冬季凹運是在1924年於xxx舉行(was held) 而配合冬季氣候共有16項比賽項目.

    主語是 The first Winter Olympic Game

    動詞是 was held (事件用被動法) 原形為hold

    補語/受詞是 1924 in …France,

    而consisted of 是第二個動詞, 故用, and連接前後二句

    16 events是consisted的補語

    that depended on the winter weather 是加強形容16 events

    若要用 which was held 則寫法可改成:

    The Winter Olympic Game which was held in 1924 in France for the first year was consisted of 16 events that depended on the winter weather.

    意思變為: 冬季凹運(首次是在1924年法國舉行) 配合冬季氣候共有16項比賽項目.

    2007-03-14 18:22:10 補充:

    抱歉 for NT$1200 wo NT$2400 改為如下也OK

    我沒用過 wo ???

    ...fined for amount from NT$1200 to NT$2400 and ....

    ...fines of amount from NT$1200 to NT$2400 and...

    參考資料: 英文學無止盡啊 但中文更历害
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  • 1 0 年前

    我總覺得,回答者: 現象與詮釋

    回答的比較對=_=

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  • 1 0 年前

    一 A對

    B的錯誤在於,超速者不是被罰錢,而是成了主詞去罰人家錢

    二 可以當人,但不一定要當人

    所以改成 dono have to

    三 用leaving 改就通順了,和你的改法的差別在於有[原因]的意思

    你的改法只有表示時間的關係

    四 因為那裡有一個and

    如果同一個主詞, and 前面和後面一個是被動一個是主動,那會不對秤

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