~急~請英文高手幫我改一下(應該沒有太多錯誤啦!)~20點~

I win this champion today. I was thankful for my parents, my grandpa and grandma, my cousin, my neighbor, my dog, my cat, my bird, my president, my teacher, my classmate, I was particularly thankful for my coach, he teach me many things, Although my leg is hurt, I still win this champion. All is everyone gave me... 顯示更多 I win this champion today. I was thankful for my parents, my grandpa and grandma, my cousin, my neighbor, my dog, my cat, my bird, my president, my teacher, my classmate, I was particularly thankful for my coach, he teach me many things, Although my leg is hurt, I still win this champion. All is everyone gave me strong willpower and endurance. Thank you for everyone.
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