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幫我看看是否有文句不順..文法錯誤等問題..麻煩請告訴我錯在哪裡..要如何改進比較好~謝謝啦^^ 主題是隱私.. “A private life is a private life and I ant to keep my private life private.” Everybody always envy the fame and status that a superstar have, but they will never understand the sacrifice they have paid. And privacy is the first things you will... 顯示更多 幫我看看是否有文句不順..文法錯誤等問題..麻煩請告訴我錯在哪裡..要如何改進比較好~謝謝啦^^
主題是隱私..
“A private life is a private life and I ant to keep my private life private.” Everybody always envy the fame and status that a superstar have, but they will never understand the sacrifice they have paid. And privacy is the first things you will lose in your everyday life such as never go out with the friend of the opposite sex, because paparazzi is always “by your side.” Never go out without bodyguards because there are many frantic fans ready to scream, hog, and touch you unexpectedly. Never have the chance to sit at the couch to chat with friends in the leisure time because I am full of schedule for everlasting tours and TV shows. It feels like that I am a bird kept in a small cage waiting desperately for the freedom to come. If I could turn back the time, I wish I was still the naïve and ordinary girl that I used to be. No more stylish clothes, delicate make-up, and faking smiles, only real me. Because I believe that “freedom and privacy do not cost a thing.”
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