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題目(中級英檢) An Awful Shopping Experience

One day, Kathy was shopping at a department store. Everything there was fifty percent off. Therefore, Kathy became very excited and picked out a lot of dresses. However, when she was about to pay, she suddenly discovered that she had lost her wallet.......

She was so anxious because there was an id card and some money in it. Kathy went to the service counter for the help. The receptionist’s attitude was bad, so she decided to find it by herself. She looked everywhere she had been to, but she still couldn’t find her wallet. When Kathy wanted to give up, she saw the wallet was above of the trash can. She was relaxed. However, after she opened and checked it, she was upset. She found that the money was gone, and her id card was also stolen. It could be a trouble to ask for a new one. She thought that was a most awful shopping experience that she had had.

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    1 0 年前
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    One day, Kathy was shopping at a department store and everything there was fifty percent off. Therefore, she became very excited and picked out a lot of dresses. However, when Kathy was about to pay, suddenly, she found that she had lost her wallet.

    She was so anxious because there was an ID card and money in it. Kathy went to the service center for help, but the receptionist's attitude was unpatient, so she decided to look fot it by herself. She searched everywhere she had been to, but she still could not find her wallet. When Kathy was about to give up, she saw the wallet was set above on a trash can. Kathy went and pick up. However, after she opened and checked it, she was upset. She found that the money was gone, and her id card had been stole also. That could be a problem to ask for a new ID. She thought that was the wores shopping experience that she ever had.

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    One day, Kathy was shopping at a department store. Everything there was fifty percent off. Therefore, Kathy became very excited and picked a lot of dresses. However, when she was about to pay, she suddenly discovered that she had lost her wallet.......

    She was so anxious because there was an ID card and some money in it. Kathy went to the service counter for help. The receptionist was rude to her, so she decided to find it by herself. She looked for it everywhere, but still couldn’t find it. Just when Kathy decided to give up, she saw the wallet on top of the trash can. She was relieved. However, after she opened and checked it, she became upset. She found that the money was gone, and so was the ID card. It could be a trouble getting a new one. She thought that was the most awful shopping experience she ever had.

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