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? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

檢查英文對話的文法~~

麻煩幫忙一下了

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A:Great to see you. What’s going on?

B:Do you know a creepy news? Two men killed an innocent passerby and escaping.

A:Really? The thing is so cruel.

B:They also disarmed a gun from a police officer. It humiliated all police officers.

A:I argue they should make some simulated status for prevention.

B:To come through the thing they will set up some maneuvers.

A:Most perpetrator usually felt left out when they were children.

B:Hmm. By the way, police arrested an innocence. It’s very hilarious.

A:Oh, they are so horrible and casual.

B:Formerly culprit be arrested they will get torture.

A:We’ll think twice before breaking any laws.

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    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    A:It's great to see you. What's going on?

    B:Not much. (in response to A's question)Do you know a creepy news? Two men killed an innocent passerby and escaped.

    A:Really? That was so cruel.

    B:They also disarmed a police officer("disarm a gun from"sounds a lil redundant). It humiliated the police. (consider them as a group)

    A:I argue that they should make some simulating cases to forstall similar events in the future.

    B:In order to come over it, they will take some actions.

    A:Most criminals usually felt left out when they were children.

    B:Hmm. By the way, the police arrested an innocence. It's very hilarious.

    A:Oh, they are so horrible and careless.

    B:Formerly. if a culprit is arrested, they will get tortured.

    A:We’ll think twice before breaking any law .

    some part of ur conversation seemed a lil incoherent..i was only correctin' u where u made grammatical mistakes

    參考資料: myself...livin' in the states
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  • 1 0 年前

    可不可以請你把你想表達的意思用中文寫出來?因為有的我不太懂你想說什麼,所以想改也沒辦法。

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