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幫我看一下求職的英文自傳,謝謝....20點

My name is Lawrence Tsao.

I’m twenty-five years old.

There are 5 persons in my family. They are my parents, elder brother ,younger brother and me. Since I was a child, my parents teach me in a democratic way. But they ask me strictly in daily habits and treating people and dealing with things. Therefore, this helps me form good virtue and learning spirit.

I majored in department of physical education at Taipei Physical Education College. I am loving travel and learning language.When I got along with my friends or participated in my school club activities, I usually took a role as a negotiator because of my easy-going and out-going personality. I always gave my friends objective suggestions appropriately to let things done perfectly.

I will face the work with the optimistic and aggressive attitude, perhaps it meet setback follow difficult , but I can discouraged and time of the meeting strive oneself break through the obstacle, let oneself grow up , hope to have an opportunity to enter your company , give play to and learn to serve company. Thank you.

這一篇是我要用來求職的英文自傳,麻煩大家幫我看一下,有沒有什麼問題呢??如果有問題的話,幫我改一下,謝謝....

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    My name is Lawrence Tsao.

    I’m twenty-five years of age.

    There are five people in my family. They are my parents, an elder brother, a younger brother and myself.

    Since I was a child, I was brought up in a family full of democracy. But my parents posed strict guidelines in my day-to-day routines and especially in treating people and dealing with issues. Therefore, these helped me forming a good virtue and a good behaviour towards education.

    I majored in Physical Education at Taipei Physical Education College. I love travel and study language. When I hang around with my friends or participating in my school’s club activities, I usually act the role of a negotiator because of my easy-going and out-going personality. I always gave my friends constructive suggestions and appropriately letting things settle perfectly.

    My attitude towards work is always optimistic and with ambition, and when I experience difficult times I am able to encourage and strive myself to get over the obstacles, allow myself to grow from the experience.

    I sincerely hoping for an opportunity to join you, and contribute my knowledge and ability to the company.

    Thank you.

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