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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

研究所自我介紹~~請檢查文法和用法生活化20點

研究所面試,我希望能很口語而不是很僵硬像書本一樣背誦,因此希望能口語化一點,只要唸起來是合乎文法邏輯,不離譜即可。

以下是我的自我介紹,請專業的您幫我檢查一下文法錯誤或錯誤用法,還是有更好的建議講法或補充皆可...因為沒在美國生活過,比較不清楚文化背景怎麼使用英文~~~

以及開頭good morning,如果講成ladies and gentleman會不會太像頒獎...還是有更好的講法~~~

Good morning.

My name is XXX, English name is Frederick. I am very pleased to this opportunity to introduce myself. I am from Kaohsiung. I graduated from Chinese Culture University. Chinese Culture University was the best choice of mine because of the only one located on National Park. I major in forestry. I got good grades, all pass. I was a good students and I’ve never been absent without notice. And I will be a good postgraduate student in the future.

Last year, I was a postgraduate student at National Kaohsiung Normal University with a major of biotechnology. But my dad had apoplexy at that time, so I had to leave school. After rehabilitation, now he is not only getting better but also healthy. He is absolutely great and I don’t worried about him any more. I have passed an postgraduate entrance examination of National Chiayi University.

I think I’m a easygoing person, Sense of responsibility, Optimistic manner and study hard. In my free time, I enjoy going jogging, going swimming, listening to the classical music and I am good at acupuncture. I’m interested in sport science. I wanna become a good graduate student, and I love this library very much. That’s why I wanna study here. I hope I can have chance to develop my interests and capabilities here.

I don’t think I use English is a challenge but a chance. My life motto is the same with 林義傑. he said after running the Sahara “You never try, you never know.”

Thank you for your attention!

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不好意思各位,我一開始沒講清楚~~~

我要面試的研究所是有關sport science領域,因此會提到。

喜歡這間學校的圖書館以及興趣sport science所以才會想來這裡就讀。

I have passed an postgraduate entrance examination of National Chiayi University.這是因為前幾天放榜我已經考取這間了,只是想讓面試委員知道我已經通過這間學校的考試,而我卻比較想就讀現在面試這間。

不好意思讓您們看的霧煞煞!!!

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  • Abby
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    其實你寫的很不錯啦

    我沒有很專業或是什麼英文高手的

    所以這就當我們分享分享英文經驗囉

    如果你希望很口語~Good morning everyone~或是 How are you doing 就可以了

    My name is XXX and you can also call me Federick. It's my honor to be here today to introduce myself. I'm originally from KaoHsiung and graduated from Chinese Culture University which has a beautiful scenery because it located in Yang-Ming-Shan National Park. My major was Forestry. I had good grades and good ethics while I was in school. And I believe I will also be a good postgraduate in your school.

    As a matter of fact, last year I attended to another graduate school - National Kaohsiung Normal University in a major of biotechnology. Unfortunately, my father had a stroke at the same time, so I had no other choice but to withdraw from class to take care of my dad. But don't worry, after one year rehabilitation, now my dad is getting better and healthier, and he also encourages me to return to school. That's why I'm here now.

    Okay, let's talk about my personality. My friends describe me as an easygoing, responsible, optimistic, and studying-hard person. I enjoy outdoor sports, such as joggin and swimming. Actually, I try to do everything a little bit to find my own interest, for example listening to the classical music and learning acupuncture. This is all because of 林義傑, who is an amazing marathon runner, he said, " If you never try, you never know." His words now become my life motto. Therefore, I will appreciate that if you can offer me the chance to learn and develop my professional skills in your school. I will definitely try my best. Thank you for your attention. I hope to see you soon.

    不好意思~我有稍微修改一點你的意思

    還有省略掉一段你講你的興趣

    因為我覺得那一段有點雜

    你喜歡聽古典音樂、學針灸、喜歡圖書館

    然後說"這就是為什麼我想就讀這間學校"

    我有點不太懂……sorry……

    所以我就改了一些些意思再圓回來

    希望你不要太介意哦

    謝謝~也希望這對你有幫助

    參考資料: Myself...
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  • Al
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    My name is XXX; My English name is Frederick. I am very pleased to have this opportunity to be here to introduce myself. My hometown is Kaohsiung. I graduated from Chinese Culture University two years ago. I chose the university because it is located in a beautiful park, the Yang-Ming Shan.

    My major was forestry. I got good grades, and passed all courses with flying color. And I was a good student in conduct as well. I did not have any unexcused absences during the four years in college, and I can assure you that I will be a good postgraduate student in the future.

    Last year, I was a postgraduate student at National Kaohsiung Normal University with a major in biotechnology when my father had a stroke and I had to quit school to take care of him. However, with good medical care and rehabilitation, he has since recovered. He is absolutely great and I don't have a thing to worry about him any more. (I have passed an postgraduate entrance examination at National Chiayi University. What is this?)

    I would characterize myself as easygoing with a strong sense of responsibility, optimistic outlook and I am a hardworking person. In my free time, I enjoy jogging, swimming, listening to classical music and surprisingly, I am a good acupuncturist. I am also interested in sports science.

    I would like to be a good graduate student, and I love this school's library very much. This, along with other factors are the reasons I like to study here. I hope I can have the chance to further develop my interests and capabilities here.

    I don't believe using English will be an obstacle for me, but I will seek every chance to read, write, and speak, and to constantly improve. My life motto is the same as that of Lin Yi-Jie's, who said after running the Sahara that "You never try, you never know.”I will always follow that in my life.

    Thank you very much for your consideration.

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