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XXXX , a senior student in XXXXXXUniversity. As an undergraduate, the study at XXXX University has furthered my understanding in the field of XXXXXX . In addition to foundation courses, courses such as XXX, XXX, XXX, and XXX has provided me advanced knowledge in XXX. The more related erudition I gain, the more I want to learn about XXXX.

To know the Unite State well, I took the XXXX in the second year of study. It has enriched my sense to American’s thought, behavior, and culture. And I also took two of courses which are taught in English, XXX and XXXX, to have more opportunities to learn English and be familiar to the whole English circumstances. After graduate, I decided to advance in XXXXX. I find XXX University to be the most ideal institution for me. I believe that I can abundant my knowledge in XXXXX in the XXXX University.

As important as academic pursuit, while in school I sharpened my ability to think in logical manner, gather data, and overcome any obstacles. I had won a prize with my teammates in a national competition event held by the XXXX forXXX, which was concerned about the XXX. I also practiced in XXXX in Taiwan. I have learned more detail and actual situation in the XXX.

To short-term targets, I will do my best to perfect all the XXX knowledge I had learned. As a foreign student, I consider that continuous advancing my English would be the most important thing. I already read some XXX books that are written in English, and I try to think everything in English in my daily life. To long-term targets, I hope I will be able to apply the XXXX theories and my professional ability learned in XXX University to many real life situations and further developed my potential.

I sincerely hope to become a student at XXX University . I am confident that I have the ability to overcome any challenges that may come my way.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is XXXX and I am a senior student in XXXXXXUniversity. As an undergraduate, the study at XXXX University has furthered my understanding in the field of XXXXXX . In addition to basic courses, courses such as XXX, XXX, XXX, and XXX have provided me advanced knowledge in XXX. The more related knowledge that I gain, the more I want to learn about XXXX.

    In order to know United State better, I took a class of XXXX in the second year of study. It has honed my sense to Americans' thoughts, behaviors, and cultures. And I also took two courses which are taught in English, XXX and XXXX. They allowed me to have more opportunities to learn English and be familiar to different English circumstances. After I graduated, I decided to advance in XXXXX. I find XXX University to be the most ideal institution for me. I believe that I can enhance my knowledge in XXXXX in the XXXX University.

    Having excelled in academia is importance. When I was in school I sharpened my ability to think in logical manner, gather data, and overcome any obstacles. I had won a prize with my teammates in a national competition event held by the XXXX for XXX. I also practiced XXXX in Taiwan. I have learned more details and actual situations in the XXX.

    In term of my short-term goals, I will do my best to perfect all my knowledge in XXX. As a foreign student, I consider that continuous advancement in English skill would be the most important thing. I already read some XXX books that are written in English, and I try to connect everything in English to my daily life. As for my long-term goals, I hope I will be able to apply the XXXX theories and my professional ability learned in XXX University to many real life situations and further develop my potential.

    I sincerely hope to become a student at XXX University . I am confident that I have the ability to overcome any challenges that come in my way.

    2007-04-02 01:42:06 補充:

    其 實 你 寫 得 還 蠻 不 錯 只 是 有 時 候 要 注 意 每 個 句 子 的 組 合 。 因 為 把 一 個 字 放 錯 了 地 方 會 把 整 個 意 思 給 改 了 。 有 時 候 ﹐ 要 看 甚 麼 情 況 才 能 用 深 一 點 的 字 眼 ﹐ 所 以 erudition 直 接 把 它 改 成 knowledge 即 可 。

    參考資料: I am ABC
  • 1 0 年前

    This is a OK but not outsanding study plan. I see no reason "why shall you be accepted" if I were the member of the admission committee".

    Per my own experience (I used to assist Taiwanese students applying for master programmes in the UK/states), I feel like you have no problem in English as the admission comittee will tell that fom your study plan. Having said that, you should stress more on: (1) why this university....you did, but not enough (2) what I expect to gain/to be after taking your course, again, not strong enough! (3) what should they have "you" in this course! Namely, what will you contribute to this course/other course members if you are successfully enrolled to the programme?

    Keep it up and good luck!

    參考資料: myself
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