黑麻糬 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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Good afternoon, professors, my name is xxx , you can call me Karen. I am happy to have this chance to introduce myself. I come from xxx High school. First, I want to talk about my personalities. I would describe myself as down to earth, determined, and compassionate. My class director used to say that I was quiet composed compared with my classmates. Well, perhaps this is because I live in a single-parent family,being a first-born child in my family. However, my family background makes me a contended person.

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  • 小真
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
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    Good afternoon,(EVERYONE).

    (不用特別指定要講教授啦!!感覺的做作!!你要是一定要加上一個對象打招呼,建議用EVERYONE)

    My name is xxx , you can call me Karen.

    I am happy to have this chance to introduce myself.(個人覺得還是在拍馬屁,這句話不建議講!!)

    I (study at) xxx High school.

    (Todat),I want to (tell you something about myself).

    I would describe myself as down to earth, determined, and compassionate. (整句話都是多餘的,不要講!!)

    (I m a person who is very ** compare with the same age people.)

    (有自信一點,不要都說是別人說的,這樣不會比較有說服力!!另外,針對composed, 我真是看不出來你到底想要說你是怎樣的人!!)

    (I am a first child in my family.)

    (個人不覺得單親家庭對於這個會有影響!!)

    It makes me become a (competitive) person.

    (你的句子不要出現,大概.也許.應該.可能..你說的每一句話一定要就是肯定句,要是你真的對自己這麼有自信的話,請一定這樣做!!)

    2007-04-05 19:59:55 補充:

    我把你的另一篇也翻譯了

    你看看到底適合不適合你吧

    參考資料: 常跟老外講話,常被糾正得到的進步
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