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When I was a child, I have had the experience of bike. That day was a rainy day. I felt very bored, so I was going to ride bike by myself. The ground was still wet from last night's storm. The fall from my bike broke my head. I was cried very loudly. My parents heard my voice was worried about me, so they run to me to see the condition of an injury. Oh my god, my head broken and bleeding. My parents took me to see the doctor in a hurry, and the doctor said I had six stitches on my head. So this is my gloomy experience.

After that I was afraid of to ride bike, until I was ninety years old. I had to get the driver's license but I had a bad memory. I didn’t want to get it.

My aunt told me doesn’t be upset by your failure in the accident. She practiced motorcycle with me and gave me more supports.

Finally I get the driver's license.

I was very appreciated her kindness

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  • 巖巖
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    When I was a child, I had an unique biking experience. It was a rainy day, and I was felling realry bored, so I decided to go and ride bike by myself. The ground was still wet from last night's storm. Then I fell from my bike and broke my head. I cried very loudly. My parents heard my voice, so they ran to me to see the condition of an injury. Oh my god, my head was broken and bleeding. My parents took me to see a doctor in hurry, and the doctor said I must get six stitches on my head. So, this is my gloomy experience.

    After that experience, I was afraid of riding a bike. Finally. when I was nineteen years old, I had to get my driver license. But I have bad memory, so I didn't want to get it.

    My aunt told me don't be upset by your failure in the accident. She practiced motorcycle with me and gave me more supports.

    Finally, I got the driver license.

    I was very appreciated her kindness

    參考資料: myself
  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    When I was a child I had a bad experience in riding a bike. I remembered it was a rainy day. Feeling bored, I took the bike and wanted to go riding by myself. However, the ground was wet due to last night’s storm and I fell off my bike. I injured my head and started crying loudly. Having heard my cries, my parents came running and examined the condition of my injury. They noticed that I was bleeding and rushed to see the doctor immediately. After the examination, the doctor said that I needed six stitches on my head. This was indeed an unpleasant experience.

    After the fall, I became afraid to ride a bike even until when I had to get a driver’s license at the age of nineteen. Haunted by the terrible fall, I was reluctant to go for the test.

    Then came my aunt who advised me not to feel upset over my past failure. We practised on the motorcycle together and she guided me along the way. Finally, I succeeded and got my driver’s license. I am so grateful and appreciate her kindness.

  • 1 0 年前

    When I was a child, I had a bad experience of riding a bike. It was a rainy day, I felt very bored, so I tried to ride a bike by myself. After the rain last night, the ground was still wet, which made me fall from my bike and break my head. I cried so loud that my parents heard me, ran to me, and checked my injury with anxiety. Unfortunately, my head was badly injured and kept bleeding. My parents took me to see a doctor in a hurry, and the doctor said I needed to have six stitches on my head, which made my gloomy experience.

    After that, I was afraid of riding a bike. Until nineteen, I had(wanted) to get a driving licence of motorcycle, but thinking about the bad experience before, I could not convince myself to ride again.

    Understanding my situation, my aunt told me not to get upset over my past failure. What was more, she accompanied & supported me to practice my riding a motorcycle.

    Finally I got the driving licence. I was very grateful for my aunt's kindness & help.

    參考資料: 奇摩字典&我自己(抱歉更動了一些字, 但我個人覺得這樣用較合適)
  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    When I was a child, I had an experience of riding a bike. It was a raining day that day. and I was bored. therefore, I decided to go out to practice my riding skills.

    The ground was still wet because of the strom last night. it cause me felt down on the ground and hurt my head. I cried loudly because it was really painful. My parents were run out of the door and worry about me when they heard the crying sound of me.

    my head was broken and bleeding. My parents took me to the hospital immediately. when we got there, the doctor said that I had six stitches on my head. it was a terrible experience of my memory.

    After that I was afraid of to ride a bike. until I was ninety(nineteen???) years old, and I had to get a driver's license. My aunt told me that do not be afraid to do anything when you encountered something frustration before. then, She practiced motorcycle with me and encourage me.

    Finally I got the driver's license.

    and I really appreciated about her kindness

    參考資料: live in new york
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