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When I was a child, I have had the experience of bike. That day was a rainy day. I felt very bored, so I was going to ride bike by myself. The ground was still wet from last night's storm. The fall from my bike broke my head. I was cried very loudly. My parents heard my voice was worried about me, so they run... 顯示更多 When I was a child, I have had the experience of bike. That day was a rainy day. I felt very bored, so I was going to ride bike by myself. The ground was still wet from last night's storm. The fall from my bike broke my head. I was cried very loudly. My parents heard my voice was worried about me, so they run to me to see the condition of an injury. Oh my god, my head broken and bleeding. My parents took me to see the doctor in a hurry, and the doctor said I had six stitches on my head. So this is my gloomy experience.

After that I was afraid of to ride bike, until I was ninety years old. I had to get the driver's license but I had a bad memory. I didn’t want to get it.
My aunt told me doesn’t be upset by your failure in the accident. She practiced motorcycle with me and gave me more supports.
Finally I get the driver's license.
I was very appreciated her kindness
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