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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看一下這篇英文文章

不知道各位覺得這篇文章有什麼需要改進的地方

文法,文章結構,句子結構.....都可以給我點意見

ps: BCC是一間大學

Challenges that freshman students face at BCC

Scheduling is the first difficulty freshman students face. Out of so many courses, freshmen are usually clueless of what classes they should start taking, because students don’t know what classes are required for their majors. Deciding what classes to take can be very frustrating. Managing the time for the classes is quite a handful, too. For instance, freshmen have to make sure classes they are taking don’t start at the same time, but they still get to take the classes they want.

Paying all the college costs is another concern. One of the costs is the tuition fees. Even thought it is usually not so much at BCC, it still can be a problem of some families. Some families may have to struggle with paying children’s tuition fees and life spending at the same time. Also, the college text books are very expensive. Students are required to have their own books for every class; as a result, they usually spend money, as much as half amount of the tuition fee, on books.

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    Challenges that freshman students face at BCC

    Scheduling is the first difficulty that freshman students have to face. Out of so many courses, freshmen are usually clueless of what classes they should start to take (在此句,小弟會用to take,語意有點未來要著手的感覺), because most students do not know what classes are required for their majors. Deciding what classes to take can be very frustrating. Managing the time for the classes is quite a handful, too. For instance, freshmen have to make sure classes they are taking which do not start at the same time, but they still get to take the classes they want.

    Paying all the college costs is another concern. One of the costs is the tuition (fees). Even thought it is not so much at BCC, it is still a problem of some families. Some families may have to struggle with paying children’s tuition (fees) and other needed expenses at the same time. Also, the college text books are very expensive. Students are required to have their own books for different classes; as a result, they usually spend money, as much as half amount of the tuition fee, on books.

    1:您沒有文法上的問題,文意小弟認為通順,基本上您對於詞性的使用都很好,連接詞,副詞,名詞的使用都很好,最後一句的as much as half amount of the tuition ,用的不錯,以補語(同位語)方式強調花費在課本上!! 但還是有中式英文感覺,如以用詞而言會稍嫌說服力不足,例如選課….為何會感到frustrating,如用hard to choose? Managing the time 改成to manage or to handle the time for each class以語意而言,這就是語意邏輯上的問題,因為我以前也常被罵這樣的問題但這只是essay看多了寫多了就會有的sense,只是個用詞習慣問題,加油喔!! Tuition就可以代表學費,可用tuition and other fees , needed expenses 必須的開支,如果這是作業,您可試試用用分詞構句,假設語氣,平型結構…等複合的方式寫句子,中師很喜歡學生小玩文法,外師要看人囉!

    在知識家已經很少人有post像您一樣的文章了,很多人都隨便一po,要修改的東西就一堆,您算是很認真的在學英文….~加油

    參考資料: 深夜打game改英文
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    1 0 年前

    Challenges Freshman Students Have to Overcome at BCC

    Scheduling is the first difficulty freshman students face. Out of so many courses, freshmen are usually clueless of what classes they should start taking, because they don't know what classes are required for their majors. Deciding what classes to take can be very frustrating. Managing the time of the classes is quite a handful, too. For instance, freshmen have to make sure the classes they are taking do not start at the same time, while they still get the classes they want.

    Paying all the college costs is another hurdle. Even thought the tuition is not so high at BCC, it still can be a problem to some families, who may have to struggle with paying their children's tuitions and living expenditure at the same time. Also, college text books are very expensive. Students are required to have their own books for every class. As a result, they usually spend as much as half the amount of tuition on books.

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