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The most beautiful memory in my mind is to become an English good learner. Althouth it just a dream , but I promise myself work hard to fullfilled it.
At begining , I am not excellened in English , getting bad grade in every English test . But I make up my mind to spend more time practicing English , I read English artice and listen to English programs every day . I whileheartedly studied in English and efforts pay off . I make great progress in English , but I cun find room for improvement in my English .
In sum , with firmly resolution and non-stop perseverance attitude in English , I believe I will have my beautiful dream come ture in someday.
- 匿名使用者1 0 年前最佳解答
1.The most beautiful memory in my mind is to become an English good learner. →我覺得memory 在這裡用來看起來很怪，因為你明明是敘述未來的事情,to become an English good learner也用的不好
建議改為The most beautiful image about my future in my mind is to
have a good command in English.<精通英文>
拼字錯誤,promise 後不可直接加另一動詞 要加子句<也就是that 後加主詞加動詞構成另一句子>
Although it just a dream , but I promise myself that I will work hard to
At the begining , I am not excellent in English and get bad grades in
every English test . But I make up my mind to spend more time
practicing English .For example, I read English articles and listen to English programs every day .
After studying hard in English,my efforts finally paid off . I make
great progress in English . However, I don't know how to pefect my
English competance further.
5. To sum up , with my firm resolution and everlasting perseverance
in English , I believe I will have my beautiful dream come ture in some
2007-04-14 01:24:14 補充：
2007-04-14 01:25:13 補充：
2. Although it "is" just a dream
2007-04-14 01:26:44 補充：
5.in some day. 直接someday 當副詞用即可參考資料： me
- 星星Lv 61 0 年前
...an English good learner 應改為 a good English learner. 或 is to learn good English.
I am not excellened in English 這句簡單一點 改為 I'm not good in English
English artice...English article
I whileheartedly studied in English...這邊看不懂
but I cun find...應改為 ...but I still can find room for improvement in my English.
In sum 改為 Finally, ...
I believe I will have my beautiful .... 應改為 I believe I will have my dream come ture someday.