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麻煩英文強的大大...幫忙改一下..3q

題目是"goals"....內容很不順= =''

In my childhood, My dream is works as a piano teacher. Consequently I spent much time to practice it. But in the process in the imagination has not been easy. Only then comprehends the interest cannot work as life goal.

In unceasing study and growth, I changed my goals many times. Because cannot sure what could I do in the future. Now my main subject is applied English, so I have been thought about my goals about famous company’s secretary or be an airhostess in any airline. These two jobs are the most popular in nearly ten years.

The goal of my life certainly is not the simple several characters may describe.

The establishment goal to complete it is must pass through section of many long processes. After the failed experienced, the result, which the defeat obtained, succeeds, is the most needle expensive.

In the end of my life goals, is be a conscientious office lady. Each month gains the fixed wage, makes a concurrent job by chance. My goals of life will be a common person, not too much difficult problem in my life is the better.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    In my childhood, my dream was as a piano teacher. Consequently, I spent much time to practice it. But the process in practicing is not that easy as I thought. Finally I comprehended that the interest cannot work as my life goal.

    In unceasing study and growth, I changed my goals many times. Because I not sure what could I do in the future. Now my main subject is applied English, so I have thought about my goals as a famous company’s secretary or be an airhostess in any airline company. These two jobs are the most popular in last ten years.

    The goal of my life can not be described by only several simple characters certainly.

    To establish the goal of my life, I think it must have to pass many long processes. After the unsuccessful experiences, (the result, which the defeat obtained, succeeds, is the most needle expensive.) 這句我實在看不出你想表達的意思...所以不知從何改起...

    In the end, the goal of my life is to be a conscientious office lady. In the future, I wish I can get the fixed salary each month, and make a concurrent job by chance in the same time. The goal of my life will be ordinary, and I hope it will be better if there are no much difficult problems in my life.

    有些單字~不是查到就可以用

    可能查出的意思不能用在這個句子裡

    我覺得寫文章不需要用到多艱深的單字

    這樣反而會產生反效果

    文法也要注意一下...

    我改的也不一定對

    給你參考一下吧~~

    參考資料: 自己的腦袋...
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  • 1 0 年前

    翻譯:在我的童年,我的夢想工作作為鋼琴老師。 結果我花費了時間實踐它。 但在過程想像力不是容易。 然後只領會興趣不能工作當生活目標。

    在不斷的研究和成長,我改變了我的目標許多次。 由於不肯定能什麼可能我在將來做。 現在我的主科是應用英語,因此我在所有航空公司考慮我的目標關於著名公司秘書或是 airhostess這二個工作在幾乎十年是最普遍的。

    我的生活目標一定不是簡單的幾個字符來描述

    完成它的創立目標是必需通行證通過許多長過程的部分。 在不合格老練以後,結果,獲得的失敗,成功,是多數的昂貴。

    在最後我的生活目標的,是一個純謹的辦公室夫人。 每個月獲取固定的薪水,做偶然一個併發作業。 生活的我的目標將是一個共同的人,沒有許多個困難的問題在我的生活中是好的。

    英文:In mine childhood, my dream work takes piano teacher. The result I spent the time to practice it. But in the process imagination is not easy.Then only comprehends the interest not to be able to work works as the life goal.

    In the unceasing research and the growth, I changed my goal many times. Because will not definitely be able any to be possible I to do in the future.Now my major is application English, therefore I in all airline considered my goal about renowned company secretary perhaps airhostess these two work in ten years is nearly most universal.

    My life goal is certainly not the simple several characters describes

    achieves its establishment goal is the essential pass passes many long processes the parts. In unqualified experienced after, finally, obtains the defeat, the success, is most expensive.

    In finally mine life goal, is a conscientious office madame. Each month gain fixed wage, makes the accidental concurrent work.

    參考資料: 其實我發現你寫的很好不必改因為我是用網路的所以不知道可不可以?
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