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題目是 : Fears

Finally, the darkness is the most horrifying thing. First of all, I am enabling to see anything and I don’t know where the danger hides. For example, during the black- out, my family and I can’t do anything because it’s so dark that we may bump into the wall or tripped by things that we can’t see. Next, it makes me start to image scary things. For an illustration, in the night I may image there is a monster in my bed or a ghost downstairs.

Everyone have something that they fear of. These are the things that I fear of because I am not a strong or brave person.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    horrifying -->horrible

    I am enabling -->I am unable (be able to/be unable to)

    For an illustration-->Because of my hallucination,

    image -->imagine

    I may imagine there is a monster in my bed or a ghost downstairs->I may imagine that there is a monster under my bed or a ghost wandering around.

    First of all, I am enabling to see anything and I don’t know where the danger hides-> First of all, I am unable to see anything, and I don’t know where potential danger can hide.

    參考資料: myself
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