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英文會話<文法錯誤&口語化>

學校段考要考自己編的對話

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這是我們打的內容

請幫我檢查文法的錯誤

如果可以

希望能更口語化

謝謝!

C: Could you show me the jeans in the showcase?

S: Sure, wait a minutes, please.

C: Excuse me. Is this jeans for a man of a woman?

S: This is for a woman.

C: Do you have this in my size? And may I try it on?

S: Certainly. This is size M.

(After C tried it on)

S: This jeans suits you beautifully!

C: Thank you! Do you have this in black?

S: Yes, it’s the last one in black!

C: Really? I’ll take this one. But it seems too long for me. I want to alter the length. Is there a charge for alteration?

S: No, it’s no extra charge.

C: That’s great. Please wrap it up. What’s the total for this?

S: It’s $1000.

C: This is over my budget. Can I use this coupon?

S: I’m sorry. We’re on sale now.

C: Is it cheaper if I pay in cash?

S: Yes. It’s 10% off. The price after the discount is $900.

C: Here’s $1000.

S: This is your change 100 dollars. Thanks.

C: Could I have a receipt?

S: Sure, here’s you receipt. Thank you for coming, please come again!

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A: Hi, I’m your new neighbor. My name is Susan.

B: Hello, Susan. I’m Nancy. It was nice to meet you!

A: Me, too! The weather is so hot today. It’s not like fall at all. Do you want to come in?

B: Sure, it’s my pleasure. Your room is so clean.

A: Thanks. Please take yourself at home. Which one do you like, coffee of tea?

B: I would like tea, please.

A: OK. What do you do in your free time?

B: I listen to the music or see the movies in y free time.

A: Really? What kind of music do you listen to?

B: I like the soft music.

A: And who is your idol?

B: I like Jacky Wu. He is interesting!

A: Ha-ha! I think so, too. By the way, do you have any special plants for this weekend?

B: No. Do you have free time?

A: Well, we can see the movie together.

B: That’s deal! And we can have afternoon tea.

A: That’s right!

B: Oh! I have to go!

A: Drop in anytime. Bye-bye.

B: See you next time!

已更新項目:

The weather is so hot today. It’s not like fall at all. <be like=像>

其他的地方我有改過了^^

謝謝你

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    C: Could you show me the jeans in the showcase?

    (用display window比較合適,showcase是像擺小東西的)

    C: Excuse me. Is this jeans for a man of a woman?

    (for man OR woman 就可以了)

    S: This is for a woman. (for woman)

    S: This jeans suits you beautifully! (也可以用fit)

    S: Yes, it’s the last one in black!

    (應該說we still have one black one left, 因為客人是在問有沒有黑的他還沒有看到,如果你說it's the last one表示他手上拿的是黑色的)

    S: No, it’s no extra charge. (THERE is no...)

    S: I’m sorry. We’re on sale now.

    (可以在清楚一點說 you can't use coupon on any on sale items)

    C: Is it cheaper if I pay in cash?

    (will it be cheaper if i pay cash)

    S: Yes. It’s 10% off. The price after the discount is $900.

    (it'll be 10% off)

    S: Sure, here’s you receipt. Thank you for coming, please come again!

    (YOUR)

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    A: Hi, I’m your new neighbor. My name is Susan.

    (也可以就說 i'm susan.)

    B: Hello, Susan. I’m Nancy. It was nice to meet you!

    (it IS nice to meet you)

    A: Me, too! The weather is so hot today. It’s not like fall at all. Do you want to come in? (it DOESN'T like fall.. 因為like是動詞)

    A: Thanks. Please take yourself at home. Which one do you like, coffee of tea? (make yourself at home. .....coffee OR tea)

    B: I would like tea, please.

    (i would have tea 也可以)

    A: OK. What do you do in your free time?

    (sure, so what do you do when you are free?)

    B: I listen to the music or see the movies in y free time.

    (watch movies in my.... 看是在家看"watch"還是去電影院看"see")

    B: I like the soft music.

    (i like light music)

    A: Ha-ha! I think so, too. By the way, do you have any special plants for this weekend? (PLANS)

    B: No. Do you have free time?

    (are you free? or do you have time?)

    A: Well, we can see the movie together.

    (we can go see a movie together)

    B: That’s deal! And we can have afternoon tea.

    (只要說 Deal !就可以了)

    A: Drop in anytime. Bye-bye.

    (feel free to drop by anytime 主要是要用by)

    B: See you next time!

    (see u later, see u soon....都可以)

    差不多是降子,沒有很多要改的,

    有些是其他句子相同用法,你再看看

    參考資料: me
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