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about 921 earthquake..英文高手幫個忙.

各位英文高手幫幫忙..小女子英文不太行..

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以下大約9句..幫忙組成一篇三段式的小文章...可以多一些文法進去..但是這9句的意思要在文章內講到...

1..I stayed at the home of my classmate, Vicky, in Taichung because I felt

bored at the end of the summer vacation.

2..The 921 Earthquake occurred.

3..I woke up in terror.

4..I went to a parking lot with her family in a great hurry.

5..Vicky and I trembled in the cold.

6..Vicky's mom gave her jacker to Vicky.

7..I thought of my parents in Kaohsiung.

8..I called my parents.

9..I went home immediately.

拜訪各位大大英文高手ㄌ......................................

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  • 1 0 年前
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    I stayed at the home of my classmate, Vicky, in Taichung because I felt bored at the end of the summer vacation (1). it was fun to be with my friends during that week. Then the 921 Earthquake occurred (2). It started in the night when we were sleeping. I woke up in terror (3) from the noise and because my bed was rocking violently.

    I jumped out of my bed, ran into the living room, and saw my friends and her family. Everyone was woken up by the earthquake and a little scared. To avoid getting hurt, we all went to a parking lot in a great hurry (4). But because we were rushing to get out of the building, we ran outside in our pyjamas, so Vicky and I was trembling in the cold (5). Luckily for Vicky, her mom grabbed a jacket before leaving, so she gave her jacker to Vicky (6).

    As we stood in the parking lot, I thought of my parents in Kaohsiung (7). They must have felt the earthquake, too. I borrowed Vicky's dad's cellular phone, and I called my parents (8). After finding out I was okay, my parents told me come home. When the earthquake stopped, I packed my bags, got a taxi, and went home immediately (9).

    There you are!

    Pick me! Pick me!

    :)

    參考資料: yours truly
  • 5 年前

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