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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我檢查英文文法~(我要人工的)

In this article, the title is “for those willing to eat less, an extended lifespan may

await”. It’s meaning if we want to our life for long and health for ourselves.

We can try to eat less.

This article is talking about monkey’s diet approach. Its use two parts. one part the

monkeys eat foods same with human. The other one, the monkeys eat low calorie

foods. The monkeys eat normal diet, begin, and show sighs of advancing ages similar

to those seen in human. The other monkeys eat low calorie diet plans are faring better.

This approach, called “calorie restriction” involves eating about 30% fewer calories

than normal while still getting adequate amounts of nutrients.

The researcher studying dietary effects also said the “calorie restriction” may be more

effective than exercise at preventing age-relate diseases.

In conclusion. This approach is good for a lot of people. But for someone is not.

Because every one 體質is different. But it’s true , if we can eat less for some high

calories foods and eat low calorie diet. Maybe we can make our health better.

我是描述我看了一篇有關於熱量限制的實驗

是用兩批猴子實驗的!

錯狠多~謝謝

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  • wen
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    1 0 年前
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    http://ca.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Al...

    這里是我改寫了您的文章後, 又在YAHOO+ANSWER里貼出來問外過人的, 您可以參考一下, 因為您的文章里有些文法我也不知道是哪裡錯, 就是好像有點怪…所以我改了很多, 然後那些外國人又再改, 所以您大概無法發現與您原文相同, 不便之處, 還請多原諒!!! 祝好運!!!

    參考資料: me and Yahoo+Answers
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