阿楓
Lv 6
阿楓 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文履歷的修改!

My aspiration is to work for a company that has your excellent reputation. I am intensely interested in contributing my skills and experience to your firm. I would welcome the opportunity of meeting with you at your convenience. You’ll find my resume attached here, my cell phone number and email address are indicated therein. I’d deeply appreciated that if you can give me a call or email as soon as you can. Thank you for your time and consideration.

請問我這篇履歷末段的文法有沒有問題?或者句子有沒有比較好的用法?

You’ll find my resume attached here, my cell phone number and email address are indicated therein.

這句可以試著改寫嗎?

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  • WTF
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    我想這是你cover letter的最後一段吧? 幫你改了一下你參考看看.

    My aspiration is to work for a company that has your excellent reputation. I am looking for a chance to apply my skills to the one of the leaders in the ______ (公司業務的領域) industry. Furthermore, I am genuinely excited about the challenges and opportunities presented in join _____ (公司名稱). I am confident that I can add immediate value to _____ (部門, team名稱) team and I would welcome the chance to discuss in person how my qualifications align with your team’s needs. My resume is enclosed, thank you for your consideration.

    參考資料: ABC
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