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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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I am interesting in new knowledges, informations, life……I am interest in everything. Especially, I am interesting in writing, I keep writing poem, prose in Chinese words everyday and got local literature prizes in last year. I am writing the life, the medicine, the souls and I will writing Australia in the future.

I want to be a chest medicine doctor. After information collection with webs, reference and people experience shares, OO Medical University is my best choice. I will study hard and diligently in the future several years. I primose I will be a sympathetic, virtuous and goodness healer.

煩請英文高回答。

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    1 0 年前
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    我看完你的上、下段自傳,假設你是要申請學校用的。幫你修改如下,希望對你有所助益。

    My name is Linda and graduated from XXX University with nursing program. After graduation from school, I was a clinic nurse in chest medicine ward of a medicine research center. During these 3 years, I found my aspiration for medicine and nursing care. For patients, I am concerned not only their physiology but also psychology. So I transferred my job to be a nursing specialist in chest medicine ward who was a clinic assistant in Taiwan. I worked hard and try to promote my professional ability for 2 years.

    When I worked there, I was full of happiness as long as patients got their relaxation from their illness. My patients are like my families and I wish they would get better care from medicical center, so I promised myself to be a clinic doctor.

    (接下一篇)

    參考資料: me, English teacher
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