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請幫我順一順英文作業之自傳

請幫我順一順英文作業之自傳.謝謝~

I am appreciated that you give me this opportunity to introduce myself.

I am 24 years of age. I have already worked for 8 years. In other words, I have the ample social experience. Currently, I am a student with the Department of Electrical Engineering at Chienkuo Technology University. In the daytime, I work in the Taining Machine Industries Co., Ltd. The main work includes producing and servicing of the various cross cone winders. I master in the automatic control to go together with line, the electric circuit manufacture, with the micro-computer PLC can program controller.

During the eight years, I was able to practice what I had learned and to acquire how to handle emergent cases. Work that I am interested in myself is always full of cordiality. Being fully responsible is my working attitude which I stick to. Once I devote myself to my job, I always give my best. In the meanwhile, I made good use of night time to gain my BA degree which enabled me to be ready for entering the next step of my career plan.

In a competitive environment such as nowadays, sustaining flexibility, abundant energy and continuous learning are key to keeping myself ahead of others. Hear for a long time your company great reputation, is it have honor this can invest service conduct example of your company to hope, thank you for your cordial kind consideration, hope to receive your reply

. I hope deeply you can give me further chance to serve your company.

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    1 0 年前
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    I really appreciate that you give me this opportunity to introduce a

    little bit of myself.(that可省略)

    I am twenty-four-year-old.(也等於I am twenty-four years old.) I

    have worked for eighteen years. In the other words, I have liberal

    experience of society. I am a student right now who is with the

    Department of Electrical Engineering at Chienkuo Technology

    University. In the daytime, I work in the Taining Machine Industries Co., Ltd. which the main work including not only producing but also

    servicing various winders of cross cone. I am in charge of the automatic

    control to get together with the line and the electric circuit manufacture

    with the micro-computer PLC's controller of program.

    Duting the past eight years, I was able to practice what I had learned

    before and used to deal with lots of cases of emergency.(deal也可用

    handle代替) I do work what I am interssted in which is always full of

    cordiality and my working attitude of insist is taking full responsibility.

    On the other hand, I always do my best once I start working. In the

    mean while, I have been working very hard on on my BA degree every

    single night that could help me to get ready for my career's plan of next

    step.(could help也可用enables me to be ready代替,get也可用to be代替)

    In the environment of competitve such as nowdays, sustaining

    flexibility abundant energy and continue learning are the major keys for me which to keep me leading the others. I heard about your company is

    famous for great reputation a long time ago. I hope that your company

    which can invest the service of conduct examples.(that可省略)

    Thank you for your sincerely considerate.(sincerely considerate也可用cordial consideration代替) I hope that I am able to receive your reply soon.(that可省略, receive也可用get代替) I will be moved and touched

    if you are willing to give me this shot to serve your company in the good future. That would be all. Thank you all very much for your time.

    2007-05-01 08:32:09 補充:

    一.第二段第六句: I am in charge of the automatic control to get together with the line and the electric circuit manufacture with the micro-computer PLC can controller of programs.

    2007-05-01 08:34:01 補充:

    二.第二段第六句:of the program表單數.

    2007-05-01 08:35:21 補充:

    二.第二段第六句:of the program表單數.

    2007-05-01 08:35:42 補充:

    三.第三段第四句:1.In the mean while, I have been working very hard on my BA's degree every single night that could help me to get ready for the next plan of my career.(BA's degree也可用the degree of BA)

    2007-05-01 08:36:42 補充:

    四.第四段第三句:Either you are going to invest your examples of service or conduct to my organization, that would be an honor for me.

    2007-05-01 08:37:43 補充:

    四.第四段第三句:That would be an honor for me either you are going to invest your examples of service or conduct to my organization.

    2007-05-01 08:59:09 補充:

    五.第二段第二句:I have been working at least eight years.

    2007-05-01 09:00:02 補充:

    六.第二段第二句:at least放在句尾也行.

    2007-05-01 09:00:25 補充:

    六.第二段第四行:I am being a student in the nights who is with the

    Department of Electrical Engineering at Chienkuo Technology University.

    七.第五段第五行:Thank you all very much for spending the wonderful time with me.或Thank you all very much for spending the time with me.

    2007-05-02 06:05:23 補充:

    第一段:I really appreciate that this opportunity is given by you to introduce a little bit of myself.(that可省略)

    參考資料: 自己&if you're not satisfied,請多多包涵吧!, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己, 自己:聰明的頭腦ˋ專業的知識和冷靜的分析
  • 1 0 年前

    I appreciate this opportunity given by you to introduce myself.

    I am 24 years old. I have already worked for 8 years. In other words, I have the ample social experience. Currently, I am a student with the Department of Electrical Engineering at Chienkuo Technology University. In the daytime, I work in the Taining Machine Industries Co., Ltd. My main jobs includes producing and serving of the various cross cone winders. I master in the automatic control to go together with line, the electric circuit manufacture, with the micro-computer PLC can program controller.

    During the eight years, I was able to practice what I had studied and to learn how to handle emergent cases. (Work that I am interested in myself is always full of cordiality)(請給我中譯,我在翻). Being fully responsible is my working attitude, which I stick to. Once I devote myself to a job, I always give my best. In the meantime, I make good use of night time to gain my BA degree which enables me to be ready for entering the next step of my career plan.

    In a competitive environment such as today, sustaining flexibility, abundant energy, and continuous learning are keys to keeping myself ahead of others. I know that your company has great reputation, it will be an honor if you will invest your service conduct example to my organization. Thank you for your cordial kind consideration, hope to receive your reply

    . I hope deeply you can give me further chance to serve your company.

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