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急急~能幫我看一下英文的文法上有錯嗎?~10點

老師叫我們用英文寫有關於自己的事

I remembered I often late for school when I was a high school student.

Although I had set the alarm clock, I still continue to sleep.

My mother was very angry because she has to call me get up everyday.

One day, I still late for school.

I remembered I hurry to take the bus to go to school.

I almost missed to get off the bus.

When I arrived at the school, my first class has already ended.

And then my teacher called me to go to office to see her. I though I am very unlucky at that time.

Now, I also improve the habit of the sleep.

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  • 乙米
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    ==原文==

    I remembered I often *late for school when I was a high school student.

    *late 是形容詞,前面要有be動詞

    Although I had set the alarm clock, I still *continue to sleep.

    *可以直接用片語sleep in 表示賴床(P.S.美式用法)

    My mother was very angry because she *has to call me *get up *everyday.

    *過去式

    * to get

    * everyday是形容詞, every day才是天天.每天的意思

    One day, I* still late for school.

    *be 動詞

    I remembered I *hurry to take the bus to *go to school.

    *過去式hurried

    *go to 可以省略

    I almost missed to get off the bus.

    When I arrived at the school, my first class *has already ended.

    *過去式用had

    P.S.這邊的語意怪怪的,既然是"幾乎快錯過公車",之後"錯過第一節課",那前面應該直接改成"錯過公車",應該會好一點

    And then my teacher called me to go to* office to see her. I though I am very unlucky at that time.

    *her office,如果改the office,表示你知我知或文章前面提到過

    Now, I *also improve the habit of *the sleep.

    *also是並且的意思,不適合用在這個地方,建議用完成式

    *用sleeping會更好

    ==修改後==

    I remembered I was often late for classes when I was in high school.

    I slept in a lot, although I had set my hard-working alarm clock.

    My mother was very angry about that because she had to wake me up every day.

    I remembered once when I was hurrying for getting on the bus to school.

    * I was so sleepy on the bus that I missed "the station which I had to get off".

    ("..."也可以改成"the chance to get off")

    After turning back to school, my first period(class) had already ended.

    Unfortunately, my teacher still called me to her office.

    But now, my bad habit has been improved a lot. The situation won't happen on me any more.

    * 的地方,我覺得理論來說,有點怪怪的,所以我大約改一下...

    參考資料: 好開心又修改了一篇XD 多多加油喔!
  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    我一直都有過敏狀況,是最近才知道要用防螨寢具的,因為醫師建議我用,我也考慮了很久,想說要買就買最好的,上個月趁網站有折扣的時候買了一組【北之特】防蹣(螨)寢具來用用看,真沒想到~~現在覺得過敏狀況有改善多了。雖然比一般的貴一些,不過~真值得!

  • 1 0 年前

    I remembered that when I was a high school student, I was late for school very often.

    Although I had set the alarm clock, I still cannot get up on time.

    My mother was very angry about this situation, because she has to wake me up every morning.

    One day, I was late for school again.

    I remembered that I take the bus to school in a hurry, so I almost forgot to get off the bus.

    When I arrived my school, my first class has already finished.

    And then my teacher called me to her office for my absence.

    At that moment, I though I am very unlucky.

    I know I have to solve this problem.

    So, I still keep improving this bad habit.

    參考資料: 我自己
  • 1 0 年前

    我幫你改改

    I remembered I often late for school when I was a high school student.

    When I was in high school, I often came in school late.

    Although I had set the alarm clock, I still continue to sleep.

    Even though I had set the alarm, but I still continue to sleep regardless if it ran off.

    My mother was very angry because she has to call me get up everyday.

    My mother was very upset because she had to wake me up everyday.

    One day, I still late for school.

    There was one day that I was late for school again.

    I remembered I hurry to take the bus to go to school.

    I remembered I took the bus to the school in a hurry.

    I almost missed to get off the bus.

    I almost missed the bus stop to get off.

    When I arrived at the school, my first class has already ended.

    After I finally arrived at the school, my first class was already ended.

    And then my teacher called me to go to office to see her. I though I am very unlucky at that time.

    My teacher then called me to her office to see her. I thought I was really unlucky at the time.

    Now, I also improve the habit of the sleep.

    As years go on, I quit the bad habit of getting up late.

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