發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

(英文)可以幫忙看看有哪裡需要修改的媽?

I feel this book has two special features:First is the depiction of the book middleman thing is very flexible, having three persons among them, making my impression the most deep.

The first is a choler, beastly drunk everyday as mire, still do not stop to sing in the mouth:Bill of"15 people in dying person box, the Ka Ka, come to a bottle of rum!".The author used many writings to describe Bill the geezer outward appearance, including a shape, skin, there is also hair plait, hands, even connect Wu black split of nail, a goes across the right half side cheeks, being suffused with green knife Ba in white, all depicting very careful.

The second unforgettable person is the leading role Ji Mu, the author doesn't emphasize his outward appearance, but from looked for a series of breathtaking affairses that the treasure on the way took place, highlight the dispassion and the tactful of the Ji Mu.

The sailor is most special the west Er Fu, the author writes him to be happy to help others, is praised by everyone widely, even hold cane, can also tidy up a kitchen cleanly, bowl the disc wipe clear and bright and very bright.Everyone but 1000010000 do not think of, the west Er Fu was the hypocrite that is hundred percent, it is all alone to plan to loot the backstage mastermind that the treasure hides unexpectedly.

The second special features is the details high tide of the story to occure repeatedly, usually by surprise outside.In the process of exploring, the author arranged many clueses diligently, seeming to take place on a ship various crisis affairs continuously, letting reader while reading story, the mood comes after to rise and fall, coming after strain and worrying.

The leading role Ji Mu is really fantastic, his age with me about, the unexpectedly courageous and cold blooded pirate goes back and forth, and takes back to come home of tool-boats and ships.His dispassion and tactful, really let me deeply admire;Also let me realize:Solving the difficulty needs

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  • 俐穎
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
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    I feel this book has two special features:First one is the depiction of the book, middleman thing is very flexible,and in this book are three persons give me a very strong impression.

    The first man is a choler, beastly drunk everyday as mire, still won't stop singing Bill of"15 people in dying person box, the Ka Ka, come to a bottle of rum!".The author used many words to describe Bill the geezer outward appearance, including his shape, skin, hair plait, hands, even connect Wu black split of nail, a goes across the right half side cheeks, being suffused with green knife Ba in white, all depicting very careful.

    The second unforgettable person for me is the leading role Ji Mu, the author doesn't emphasize his outward appearance, but the series of breathtaking affairses of seeking the treasure, highlights the dispassion and the tactful of the Ji Mu.

    The sailor is the most special one --the west Er Fu, the author makes him a happy and helpful person, praised by everyone everywhere, even when disabled and have to hold a cane, still has his kitchen, bowl the disc wipe clear and bright. No one will think about that the west Er Fu is a hypocrite,

    實在有點看不太懂你的意思,所以不知道後面該怎麼改才好

    歹事啦~~

    參考資料: 自己
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  • wen
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    please paste the Chinese version also....otherwise, it is really hard to understnad some of your sentences...

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