闇之神龍 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

哪位英文很強的 可以幫忙加長英文演講稿的

因為學校有演講比賽

我要代表我們班去比

但是演講稿要三分鐘

可是我沒辦法寫到三分鐘的演講稿

希望有哪位英文很好的大大幫我加長到三分鐘

以下是我目前打的演講稿

I have a good friend. His name is Tony. We knew each other when we were in elementary school. He is very kind to help any when some one needs help. We play together when after school, but he is very easy to get angry if someone get him mad when we play together. Some times, he hit someone if he was got angry by some other classmate. We are junior high school students now. We are lucky in the same class. So we are classmates again. We still keep friend ship till now. Now, we also play together at school. We often play TV game or on-line game together after school. Some times, we chatted a lot from internet to share some interesting stories and discussed homework. Tony is my best friend. If I did not have this best friend. I thank my life is no fun at all so I must treasure this good friend well.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    To have a good friend in one’s life is very important. Because whenever you need, they are there for you. They fulfill our life experiences and give us a lot of pleasure.

    Luckily, I got one in my high school. His name is Tony. I met him in elementary school. The reason why I like him is that He is very kind. In addition, he is always willing to assist people when they need help. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Tony is that kind of good friend. He did help me a lot. (這後面可以加上他曾幫助你的經驗)

    However, Tony has a defect. He easily gets mad when we play with some other classmates. Sometimes, I think it is not a big deal, but he still care about those little things. (不知道你們是不是這情況啦!) As a good friend of him, I think I have the responsibility to admonish him against his bad temper.

    Now, We are junior high school students. It is lucky that we go to the same school and have the same classes, so we become classmates again. We always play together at school, and play video game and on-line game at my/his home after school. Even though we have spend much time together, we still have many things to share to each other. Therefore, we also chat a lot on the Internet to share some interesting stories or discuss our homework.

    Tony plays an important role in my life. Without him, my life would not be so fun and full of merriment. I will treasure our friendship and regard Tony as my best friend forever.

    我幫你改了一些文法結構和加上一些內容,應該會讓整個演講比較有邏輯,希望真的有幫到你忙 ^_^

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