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投影片之口語英文修改

我英文課要用英語口頭報告,希望大家幫忙改一下,我的說法是否有錯誤,或者有哪需要更改的!!謝謝

投影片1.

Hello, everyone, my name is Kristin. After this films. I will show you some photos. I think the house was very interesting and a little terrible. And i want to tell you something happened.

2.

For expemple, this room was damaged in San Francisco earthquake, and Sarah felt the spirits were unhappy about the room. So she boarded up the room and never repaired. Well, let’s go on the next page.

4.

Although she stayed in many rooms to avoid the ghosts.

Here was “Her” bedroom, where she passed away. It means she died on this bed.

Hmmm….I think she was a very small woman. A very short person!

Do you want to see her?

5.

Can you see her standing in the next room, wearing a Victorian dress, be her spirit? Someone maybe think it not very terrible. Ok!Just relax your body! Let’s go move on.

6.

In this Ball room, she bought a 12-candle chandelier and added a candle in the middle. I think it very interesting! 12+1=? ......Throughout the house, the number “13” appears over and over.

7.

Like 13 jewels in this beautiful windows.

Don’t worry about that. Let’s go ahead!

8.

This is a very famous view, and call “Door to Nowhere”

It means didn’t go anywhere. So funny!

9.

Thiswoman opens a closet and sees…. the neighboring room.

10.

....Or a wall. It’s very interesting!!

11.

Strange Window. Is this window in the floor or in the ceiling?

12.

Pay attention,the bell tower was rung at midnight to call the spirits.

13.

It’s a front of the house.

14.

In the end, who can answer me a question? What is Sarah’s favorite number? Anybody knows?

因為我是點圖, 然後說明 ,所以句子都是要看圖來講的

那如果有看不懂之處,我在做補充,謝謝各位喔!!

已更新項目:

Pay attention,the bell tower was rung at midnight to call the spirits.

Summer是說↓

The bell tower would ring at midnight to call forth the

spirits. call forth the spirits 這樣不有點繞舌嗎?

2 個已更新項目:

It's the end. Then who can answer me for this question? What's Sarah’s favorite number? Anybody knows?

這句, 如果講Finally, who can answer me a question, what's Sarah's favorite unmber? Anybody knows?

1 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    每一點都有改一些, 請參考看看哦

    投影片1.

    Hello, everyone, my name is Kristin. After playing these films, I will show you some photos. I think the house is very interesting and a little

    scary. And I'll also tell you what happened to this house.

    2.

    For expemple, this room was damaged in San Francisco earthquake, and Sarah felt some spirits unhappy about the room and even upset. So she

    boarded up the room and never repaired. Well, let’s go on the next

    page.

    4.

    Sarah stayed in many rooms to avoid the ghosts, but here was “Her”

    bedroom, the ghost's bedroom, where "she" passed away. She just died

    on this bed. Hmmm…. I think she is a small woman, a very short

    woman. Do you want to see her?

    5.

    Can you see her standing in the next room, wearing a Victorian dress?

    Someone maybe think it's not very horrible. Ok! Just be relaxed and

    follow me! Let’s keep going on.

    6.

    In this Ball room, she bought a 12-candle chandelier and another candle

    was placed in the middle. I think it's very interesting! 12+1=? ......

    Throughout the whole house, the number “13” appeared over and

    over again.

    7.

    Like 13 jewels incrusted in these beautiful windows.

    Don’t worry about that. Let’s go ahead!

    8.

    This is a very famous view, called“Door to Nowhere.”

    It means people can't go anywhere by the door. So funny!

    9.

    This woman opened a closet and saw… the neighboring room...

    10.

    ....Or a wall. It’s very interesting!!

    11.

    Strange Window. Is this window in the floor or the ceiling?

    12.

    Pay attention! The bell tower would ring at midnight to call forth the

    spirits.

    13.

    It’s the front of the house.

    14.

    It's the end. Then who can answer me for this question? What's Sarah’s favorite number? Anybody knows?

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