鄭小樹 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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Hello, everybody. My name is Claire. Today I want to talk about Harry Potter chapter four “The Keeper of The Keys”.

At first, we come to “Chapter setting”,

•A giant breaking the door. Who is the giant? He is the giant, Rubeus Hagrid; I think everybody already knows who he is. He is already appeared at Chapter one. Why does Rowling called him a giant? The Chapter one describes his body shape “almost twice as tall as a normal man and least five times as wide. He had hands the size of dustbin lids and his feet in their leather boots were like baby dolphins.” Just like that. For all that, Hagrid is a blandly and friendly giant.

•Harry already gets his letter. It’s Hagrid gave him. The yellowish letter is an acceptance letter from Hogwarts by deputy headmistress, Minerva McGonagall.

•Last but not least, that day is Harry’s birthday. So Hagrid gave him a gift—a large, sticky chocolate cake with Happy Birthday Harry written on it in green icing. By the way, does everybody know when Harry’s birthday is? It’s July thirty-first. He was born on 1980.

Let us to see the “words”

•Muggle—P.62, non-magic folk. Just like Dursleys’.

•Abnormal—P.63, not normal, something unusual. Like Harry in Aunt Petunia’s eyes.

Ok, questions

•Hargid gave Harry two things, what are they?

•If you are Hagrid, what kind of gift you will give to Harry.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hello, everybody; my name is Claire. Today I would like to(基本上這樣說是比較禮貌的方式) talk about the fourth chapter of the novel "Harry Potter" which the title is "The Keeper of the Keys".

    I want to begin with "Chapter setting".

    ‧A giant breaks (你所用的breaking是現在進行式…如果要保留應該要在前面加is, 不過在這裡我覺得用breaks比較合適)the door. Who is the giant? Rubeus Hagrid is his name. I believe that (如果是猜想的話用’我相信’比較合適)everybody had already known about him (因為是已經知道…所以用過去完成式比較好), he had appeared in Chapter one.(同上一句) Why did Rowling call him a giant?(你用的是過去式問法,這種時候call這個動詞要保留原型…應在do這個字上做變更,也就是改成did(do 的過去式)) In Chapter one there are sentences describing his body shape "[is] (這是引用句的規則…如果想加入一些不屬於原本句子的字必須要加[]這種括號…而這個句子缺動詞所以要加is….引用句跟我們寫的句子最好要能銜接通順)almost twice as tall as a normal man and least five times as wide. He had hands the size of dustbin lids and his feet in their leather boots were like baby dolphins". However, Hagrid is a blandly and friendly giant.

    ‧Harry had already gotten (過去完成式)his letter which was Hagrid who gave him. It is an acceptance letter from Hogwarts written by the deputy headmistress, Minerva McGonagall, on a piece of parchment. (你所謂的yellowish 我猜是因為羊皮紙是那種陳舊的黃色….(在哈利波特裡都是用羊皮紙)所以我直接幫你改成parchment,羊皮紙的意思)

    ‧last but not least(對不起囉我不太了解這句話的用意所以可能要問別人), that day was (因為你在下一句用了過去式)Harry’s birthday. Therefore, Hagrid gave him a gift—a large, sticky chocolate cake with green icing on it saying “Happy Birthday Harry”. By the way, is there anybody knows when Harry’s birthday is? (抱歉你說的是 ‘大家知不知道’ 而我擅自幫你改成 ‘有沒有人知道’了) It’s July thirty-first, 1980. (另外再加一句有點累贅,可以直接在日期後面加上年份)

    2007-05-21 06:42:50 補充:

    ‧Now I would like to talk about a special word which was created by Rowling. (我幫你加上一句話說明麻瓜這個詞是羅琳所創的)

    ‧ Muggle—P.62, non-magic folk. Just like the Dursleys’ family.

    ‧ And then, I want to introduce a vocabulary. (vocabulary是字彙的意思…通常講單字用這個字比較好)

    2007-05-21 06:43:19 補充:

    ‧ Abnormal—P.63, not normal, something unusual. It was used to describe how Aunt Petunia thought about Harry. (我幫你改成abnormal這個字被用來形容佩妮阿姨對哈利的觀感)

    ‧ Finally, I have some questions to ask: (最後 ,我有一些問題想請問大家)

    2007-05-21 06:43:31 補充:

    ‧ What were the two things Harry received from Hargid?

    ‧ If you were Hargid, what kind of gift would you give to Harry? (這整個句子是假設語氣,所以必須要用過去式…而不論主詞是什麼都一律用were)

    2007-05-21 06:43:49 補充:

    http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/?qid=140601...

    (過去完成式的一些說明)

    http://www.cybertranslator.idv.tw/grammar/conditio...

    (有關假設語氣)

    參考資料: 本身在美國讀書
  • 小X
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

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    ===把修改部分消掉的===

    Hello everybody, myname is Claire. Today I will be talking about Harry Potter: the Chamber of Secrets chapter four, “The Keeper of The Keys”.

    First, we will be discussing the chapter’s brief summary

    •A giant broke in the door. Who is the giant? Rubeus Hagrid that is, I believe everybody know who he is now since he has already appeared in Chapter One. Why would Rowling call him a giant? Because according to the description in Chapter One, his body shape is “almost twice as tall as a normal man and least five times as wide. He had hands the size of dustbin lids and his feet in their leather boots were like baby dolphins.” Despise Hagrid’s appearance, he is a blandly and friendly giant.

    •Harry has gotten the letter from Hagrid. The yellowish letter was an acceptance letter from Hogwarts by the deputy headmistress, Minerva McGonagall.

    •Last but not least, that day was Harry’s birthday, so Hagrid gave him a large, sticky chocolate cake with “Happy Birthday Harry”written on it in green icing. By the way, does everybody know when Harry’s birthday is? It’s July 31st, 1980.

    Let us look at the vocabulary

    •Muggle—P.62, non-magic folk. Just like the Dursleys’.

    •Abnormal—P.63, not normal, something unusual. Like Harry in Aunt Petunia’s eyes.

    Here are some questions to answer

    •What two things didHargid give Harry?

    •If you were Hagrid, what kind of gift will you give Harry?

    參考資料: 小小的我..........
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