發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文演講----My Classmates <<急>>

我自己寫了一篇,

只是覺得有點單調,

我想多加一些難一點的單字,

可是加上去的單字要注釋一下中文^-^,

還有,幫我檢查一下有沒有文法用錯 或是拼錯的,

謝謝各位囉 (!)

注 :

1. 我現在國一 要參加演講比賽

2.時間是3-4分鐘

我的文章 --------------------->

Since I have been in this class, I made a lot of classmates. They are all friendly and kind to me.

Although sometimes I altercated with them, we still usually supported or studied with each other.

They are all my good friends.

Why I say it again and again?

Now, let me describe my classmates to you!

And you will love our class more and more.

They help me all the time, when I have any problem.

They make me laughing when I am angry or sad.

Sometimes they looked like a funny child if you come to our class.

But in fact, they think a lot of different things in their own world.

She is a special classmate for me.

Her name is Judi who has big eyes with long hair.

She is good at English, too, so I always learn some words from her.

By the way, we have the same hobby, too.

We usually enjoy our comic strip or draw a comic together.

Judi and I like to chat very much, we don’t have any secret.

Can you imagine our friendship is as close as sisters?

I am really proud of this friend indeed.

To sum up, I like my classmates and Judi very much.

I will cherish the friendship forever.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Since I have been in this class, I made a lot of friends in my class. They are all friendly and kind to me.

    Although sometimes I altercate with them, we still support each other and study with each other.

    They are all my good friends.

    Do you know why i say it(此代名詞不清楚你在指什麼,你可以把那件事寫清楚,如(我不確定你指的跟我認為的事是一樣的,若不是,自己改):do you know why i say that they are my good friends again and again?) again and again?

    Let me describe it to you! (這裡的it跟上一句的it是指同一件事,指說為什麼我一直重複說他們是我的好朋友)

    And you will love my classmates as me. (我認為因為你一直在說的是「人」,而不是「班級」,所以改classmates)(不用more and more的原因是聽眾根本不認識你的同學,所以一開始根本不可能愛你的同學,但more and more的感覺是原本就有點愛了,但聽完你說之後,更愛了)

    They help me whenever I have problem.

    They make me laugh whenever I am angry or sad.

    Sometimes they look like funny children if you come to my class.

    (下面這句but....,和上面那句sometimes...感覺不太連貫,感覺好像沒有什麼關係的兩個句子,可能下面那具要改一下)

    Judi, who has big eyes with long hair, is a special classmate for me.

    (如果第二段直接講she,會讓人搞不懂你在說什麼,會以為你還在說上一段的「同學們」)

    She is good at English, so I always learn some new words from her.(不加too的原因是,在寫too之前,你必需先說誰英文很好,後面才會另一個人英文也很好,或是你也可以說她像誰一樣英文很好:she is good at English as somebody.)

    We have the same hobby.

    We usually enjoy our comic strip or draw a comic together.

    Judi and I like to chat very much. We don't have any secret between us.(我們之間的秘密)

    Can you imagine our friendship is as close as sisters?

    I am really proud of this friend indeed.

    I like my classmates and Judi very much.

    I will cherish the friendship forever.

    不知道我的解釋你能不能懂,但有些地方你會那樣寫也許有你的想法,你就自己決定吧!

    以一個國一生來說,你能寫這樣,很棒喔!!

    繼續加油!你會越來越好!!

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