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One time i was a child. My parents wanted back to my grandmother's house because she got sick, and nobody can take care of her. Mygrandfather is blind so he can't do anything without my grandmother. So my parents decide to went back and take care of them. My brother and i stayed at home. We can't go with them because we have class tomorrow, and they belief we can take care everything.

Whe they left. My brother and i were so excited. This is the first time they went out not sleeping at home. We invited a lot of friends came and have a party. We bought many food and drink. Some people brought some alcohol. Everybody was crazed. We had a lot of fun that day. Afther the party the house looked like a battle place. The garbages were any where and my parent's room was very dusty. We looked to each other and though we got the big trouble.

We tried to clean the house, but we fele asleep because we drink a lot of alcohol. We were drunk so we fell asleep until next day. When my parent's came back. They were every angry because they trust us, but we made them despaired.

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    1 0 年前
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    I remember once when I was a child, my parents wanted to go back to my grandmother's house because she was ill, and nobody could take care of her. My grandfather is blind so he could not do anything without my grandmother. My parents decided to go back and take care of them. My brother and I stayed at home. We could not go with them, because we had to go to school the next day. They trusted us that we could take care of ourselves.

    Right after they left, my brother and I were so excited. This is the first time that they did not come to sleep. We invited a lot of friends to come for a party. We bought many food and drink and some people brought alcohol. Everybody went crazy and had a lot of fun. After the party the house looked like a battlefield. The trash was everywhere and my parent's room was very messy too. My brother and I looked to each other and knew that we were going to be in trouble.

    Therefor, we started to clean the house, but we were hangover and fell asleep until the next day. When my parents came back, they were very angry because they trusted us, but we disappointed them.

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  • 1 0 年前

    One time I was a child. My parents wanted back to my grandmother's house because she got sick, and nobody can take care of her. My grandfather is blind so he can't do anything without my grandmother. So my parents decide to went back and take care of them. My brother and I stayed at home. We can't go with them because we have class tomorrow and they belief we can take care everything.

    When they left, my brother and I were so excited. This is the first time they went out not sleeping at home. We invited a lot of friends came and have a party. We bought many foods and drinks. Some people brought some alcohol. Everybody was crazed. We had a lot of fun that day. After the party the house looked like a battle place. The garbage was any where and my parent's room was very dusty. We looked to each other and though we got the big trouble.

    We tried to clean the house, but we felt asleep because we drink a lot of alcohol. We were drunk so we fell asleep until next day. When my parents came back. They were every angry because they trust us, but we made them despaired.

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