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英文翻譯 請幫我校對 字數很少

我的英文期末報告

對我來說很重要

偏偏我的英文不怎麼好

但我還是勉強的翻一下

希望有能力的大大能幫我校對一下

錯的整句可以直接改 謝謝

主題:發揮您的愛心

Show your love and caring for the animals.

內容:

在這個地球上,僅剩下少數的動物能在野外自由的生活。

On earth, only a minority of animals can enjoy free life in the wild

但,浣熊就沒那麼幸運了。牠擁有保暖的毛草,滿足人類奢華的享受。

Unfortunately raccoon has thermal coat to satisfy human desires.

人們切斷牠的手腳。

Its hands and feet cuts off by people.

活生生的扒下牠的皮草,只是為了製成毛皮大衣。

in order to produce coats

動物能為人類付出更多。

The animals are able to do more things for people.

以下為真實案例,模擬演出。

Follow is a truth story, they performed a simulate drama.

小豬聽到男孩的求救聲。

The little pig heard the boy’s shriek.

急忙跳進河裡。

It fleet jumps into the river

小男孩因為太過慌張,用力拉扯繩子。

The little boy too nervous so he put forth his strength to pull the rope

小豬下沉二次,但牠知道惟有用力一游,才可救活小男孩。

The little pig sunk twice ,but it only put forth its strength to swim ,then it wll bring his through.

現在採用集約式養經濟型動物。

Nowadays people breed a wide range of poultry in collection way.

一大群雞隻生活在狹小的密閉空間裡。

a crowd of chickens life in small and close space.

如果以學校的同學來看,桌子似乎太多餘。

In classmates of school’s view point, the desks occupy the class.

這樣是不是可省去更多的成本啦?

Can it save the cost ?

就像是這群雞集所在的環境。

Just like the chickens dwell in the environment.

當然,也不需要操場。

Of course, you don’t need a playground

那餐廳呢?不需要,太浪費錢了。

Is there a restaurant ?No, too waste money.

食物直接送到教室裡吧!

We. deliver foods in direct to classroom

廁所當然不用了,放幾個桶子吧!

There isn’t a Restroom . put some buckets in the classroom.

你喜歡這樣的生活嗎?

Would you like it?

以下欣賞一段由基因改造的雞之影片。

Follow we see a movie about chicken of Gene transformation

你可以改變他們的生活。

You can change their life.

你可以愛護他們。

You can care for them.

感謝您的收看。

Thank you of your attention.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    內容:

    在這個地球上,僅剩下少數的動物能在野外自由的生活。

    On the earth, only a minority of animals can enjoy free life in the wilds.

    但,浣熊就沒那麼幸運了。牠擁有保暖的毛草,滿足人類奢華的享受。

    However,raccoons are not such a lucky species./Unfortunately, raccoons have thermal coats that can satisfy people's desires/to satisfy human

    desires.

    人們切斷牠的手腳。

    Their hands and feet are cut off by people,

    活生生的扒下牠的皮草,只是為了製成毛皮大衣。

    in order to produce coats./just for making coats.

    動物能為人類付出更多。

    The animals are able to devote/contribute much more to people.

    以下為真實案例,模擬演出。

    The following is a true story/real case. Here is a mimic performance.

    小豬聽到男孩的求救聲。

    The piglet heard a boy's shriek.

    急忙跳進河裡。

    It fleetly jumped into the river.

    小男孩因為太過慌張,用力拉扯繩子。

    The little boy was too nervous so he put forth his strength to pull the

    rope.

    小豬下沉二次,但牠知道惟有用力一游,才可救活小男孩。

    The piglet sunk twice ,but it only put forth its strength to swim so that/

    then it could bring him through.

    現在採用集約式養經濟型動物。

    Nowadays people breed poultry in an intensive way.

    一大群雞隻生活在狹小的密閉空間裡。

    A crowd of chickens lives in a small and closed space.

    如果以學校的同學來看,桌子似乎太多餘。

    In schoolmates' viewpoints, the desks are(seems to be) spare

    (unneccessary).

    這樣是不是可省去更多的成本啦?

    Can it save the cost ? / Can't it save a great deal of cost?/It can save a

    lot of cost,right?

    就像是這群雞集所在的環境。

    Just like the chickens' situation/ where the chickens are/the environment

    the chickens stay.

    當然,也不需要操場。

    Of course, you don't need a playground

    那餐廳呢?不需要,太浪費錢了。

    Is there a restaurant ?No, it's too wasteful/ it wastes too much.

    食物直接送到教室裡吧!

    We(? ?/-->Well) deliver foods into the classroom directly

    廁所當然不用了,放幾個桶子吧!

    There isn't a toilet./ The toilet isn't needed. Put some buckets in the

    classroom.

    你喜歡這樣的生活嗎?

    Would you like it?

    以下欣賞一段由基因改造的雞之影片。

    Next, let's enjoy/watch a movie about genetically modified

    (GM基因改造)chickens/the genetically modification of chickens.

    你可以改變他們的生活。

    You can change their life.

    你可以愛護他們。

    You can care for them.

    感謝您的收看。

    Thank you for your attention/attentiveness/attendance.

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    有一些文法錯誤和比較奇怪的句子

    我已經盡量把錯誤改正過來

    2007-05-23 17:58:05 補充:

    Here are some suggestion in the brackets.

    參考資料: myself
  • 1 0 年前

    在這個地球上,僅剩下少數的動物能在野外自由的生活。

    On the earth, only a minority of animals can enjoy free life in the wild

    但,浣熊就沒那麼幸運了。牠擁有保暖的毛草,滿足人類奢華的享受。

    Unfortunately raccoons have thermal coat to satisfy human desires.

    人們切斷牠的手腳。

    Its hands and feet cuts off by people.

    活生生的扒下牠的皮草,只是為了製成毛皮大衣。

    in order to produce coats

    動物能為人類付出更多。

    The animals able to do more things for people.

    以下為真實案例,模擬演出。

    Follow this truth story, they performed a simulate drama.

    小豬聽到男孩的求救聲。

    The little pig heard the boy’s shriek.

    急忙跳進河裡。

    It jumped into the river

    小男孩因為太過慌張,用力拉扯繩子。

    The little boy was too nervous so he put forth his strength to pull the rope

    小豬下沉二次,但牠知道惟有用力一游,才可救活小男孩。

    The little pig sunk twice ,but it only put forth its strength to swim ,then it wll bring his through.

    現在採用集約式養經濟型動物。

    Nowadays people breed a wide range of poultry in collection way.

    一大群雞隻生活在狹小的密閉空間裡。

    a crowd of chickens live in small and close space.

    如果以學校的同學來看,桌子似乎太多餘。

    In classmates of school’s view point, the desks occupy the class.

    這樣是不是可省去更多的成本啦?

    Can it savemuch cost ?

    就像是這群雞集所在的環境。

    Just like the chickens dwell in the environment.

    當然,也不需要操場。

    Of course, you don’t need a playground

    那餐廳呢?不需要,太浪費錢了。

    Is there a restaurant ?No, it takes too money.

    食物直接送到教室裡吧!

    We deliver foods in direct to classroom

    廁所當然不用了,放幾個桶子吧!

    There isn’t a Restroom . put some buckets in the classroom.

    你喜歡這樣的生活嗎?

    Would you like the life like this?

    以下欣賞一段由基因改造的雞之影片。

    Follow we see a movie about chicken of Gene transformation

    你可以改變他們的生活。

    You can change their life.

    你可以愛護他們。

    You can take care for them.

    感謝您的收看。

    Thank you of your attention.

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