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There are three people in their family.

There are father, mother and a child.

Last Saturday 10:00 a.m. they were busy at home.

The mother washed the dishes in the kitchen.

The father spent the whole morning tidying up the room

because it was in chaos. He used the vacuum cleaner to

clean the floor. At that time, the child was playing the

bauble laughing in the bedroom. They were all did by them self.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    大致上沒什麼錯...幫你改好一點

    There are three people in their family.

    The family members include a father, mother and a kid.

    Last Saturday at 10.00a.m. they were busy at home.

    Mum was washing dishes in the kitchen.

    Dad spent the whole morning tidying up the room

    because it was in a chaos/mess. He used the vacuum cleaner

    to clean the floor. While he was doing so, the kid/child was playing the baubles and laughing in the bedroom. The baubles were all done by himself

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  • 老蔡
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    1 0 年前

    There are three people in their family: a father, mother and a kid.

    Last Saturday at 10.00a.m, they were busy at home.

    The mother was washing dishes in the kitchen.

    The father spent the whole morning tidying up the room

    because it was in a chaos/mess. He used the vacuum cleaner

    to clean the floor. While he was doing so, the kid/child was playing the baubles and laughing in the bedroom. The baubles were all done by himself .

    ps:Mom & dad適合用在口語

    參考資料: 參考樓上大大
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