好學生 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我校正3題英文翻譯(very 簡單)拜託!!

【看起來很多,其實非常簡單= =】

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When I was in elementary school, I am 9 years old. I have get sick, and my family also get sick, expect my father, so we are go to hospital and hired a big ward, I have running nose, cough and have a pain in the abdoen. It is to grieve to the extent of wishing to die.

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I eat fruit and vegetables everyday and go to exercise make me healthy. I don't want to stay up late because that can make me have a pock.

3.

Edison, he is invent the light bulb, is make people can build the mansions, and people can take lot of night activity and changed the world.

*幫幫我吧,多謝!!

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當我9歲讀小學的時候,我和家人都感冒,除了我爸爸沒有感冒,所以去醫院租了一間大病房,我當時流鼻水、咳嗽、肚子痛、很痛苦,生不如死。

我每天吃蔬菜做運動讓我身體健康,我不想要熬夜,因為會讓我長痘痘。

愛迪生,他發明了電燈泡,使人們可以蓋大樓,人們也可以從事很多夜間活動,這項發明改變了世界。

麻煩你...

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也是校正3提,【看起來很多,其實非常簡單= =】,跟上面差不多...><

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  • 1 0 年前
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    大大有中文嗎?如果有中文會更好翻唷

    其中有幾個時態不太對 如果有中文請放上來吧

    還有啊 "abdoen"似乎拼錯嚕~應該是"abdomen"指的是「下腹」

    如果確定沒有中文...我再把我翻的放上來

    2007-06-02 21:53:55 補充:

    大大第二題的"....go to exercise make me healthy."也是每天都作嗎?

    2007-06-03 09:09:56 補充:

    When I was nine years old in the elementary school, my family and I all got sick except my father, so we went to the hospital and hired a big ward. I had running nose, cough and even felt pain in my abdomen. It was so uncomfortable that I wanted to grieve to the extent of wishing to die.

    2007-06-03 09:10:32 補充:

    I eat fruits and vegetables and go to exercise everyday to make me healthy. I don't like to stay up late, for it may make me have a pock.

    Edison, who invented the light bulb, made people can build the mansions and can do many moonlightings. This invention had totally changed the world.

    2007-06-03 09:11:07 補充:

    大大就參考看看吧

    參考資料: 自己, 自己, 我自己, 我自己
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    1 0 年前

    1.When I was 9 years oldin elementary school, I have got sick, and my parents also got sick,expect my father. so we are go to hospital and hired a big ward, I have running nose, cough and have a pain in the abdoen. It is to grieve to the extent of wishing to die.

    2. I ate fruits and vegetables everyday, and go exercise to make me get healthier. I don't want to stay up late because that will make me have a

    pock.

    3.Edison, he invented the light bulb, make people build the mansions,

    and people can take lot of night activites and changed the world.

    仔細看...有些我只改了一點點...

    我不是很確定喔!

    參考資料: 自己
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