修改英會劇本

這是我們的英會劇本

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N: That was a terrible thing happened on a traveling ship. People on the ship were enjoying the wonderful vacation till the ship encounter a war. The gunpowder was bumped and there were four people survive. They were waiting for rescue on the lifeboat.

12: Now. Only our four people survive. Our bed of thorns was dangerous and shark infested water. So, first we should introduce ourselves to other people so that we could help each other.

12: My name is Cash. I’m a priest and I’m in charge of administer in the church also brings a lot of happiness to the believers.

37: My name is Pig. I’m an accountant in my country and I’m in charge of strike every day turnover volume.

36: My name is Appling. I’m a chef of Grand hotel and I can make many tasty courses to assuage the customers

28:My name is Jessie. I’m a business person. I’m the boss of a syndicate. My syndicate is famous in hi-tech.

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36:Guys, I have a bad news to tell you. I found we don’t have enough water for 4 people.

28:I don’t want to die. I still have a lot of business to handle and I haven’t found my successor.

12:〈Although he is tense but he act calm〉You have to believe God will help us.

37:Oh my god!What I should do now. Sharks and lack water It’s too terrible.

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36: It’s so bad. Well, someone must be sacrificed, or we all go die.

37: What? We are poor enough now.

28: Why does God treat us like this? Why do we suffer from this?

12: You should believe God treats us in candor. I believe the thing has still opportunity

37: It’s enough. God, God, how do you love your God?

28: Really! In the so hard situation, you are so optimistic.

36: Is it possible that your God always love love love no end?

37: That’s right.

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I should not die. There is nobody in my company has enough ability to manage my company now. If my company bankrupt, there were hundreds of thousands of staff would out of work.

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    Scene1

    N: That was a terrible thing happened to the cruiser. People on the ship were enjoying their wonderful vacation till the war broke out close to the ship. There were shootings and bombings. Only four people survived. They were waiting for rescue on the lifeboat.

    12: Now. Only four of us survived.

    (Our bed of thorns was dangerous and shark infested water.)看不懂

    We should introduce ourselves here, so that we know each other and can help each other. Let me start from myself. My name is Cash. I'm a priest and I administer to the people in the church. I believe that I bring happiness to believers.

    37: My name is Pig. I'm an accountant in my country and I'm in charge of (strike every day turnover volume.)看不懂

    36: My name is Appling. I'm a chef at Grand Hotel and I can make magic food that soothes people's tension.

    28:My name is Jessie. I'm a business person. I'm the owner of a syndicate. My syndicate is famous in hi-tech products.

    Scene2

    36:Guys, I have bad news here. We don't have enough water for four of people.

    28:Oh no.... I don't want to die. There are still a lot of things to do in the company. I haven't found my successor...

    12:〈He tried to act calm to cover his tense.〉You have to believe that God will help us.

    37:Oh! What should we do now? We are surrounded by sharks and we don't have enough water...

    2007-06-01 23:31:32 補充:

    Scene3

    36: It is terrible... We have to sacrifice someone here, or else we're all gonna die.

    37: What? The situation is tough enough now...

    28: Why does God treat us like this? Why do we have to suffer from this?

    2007-06-01 23:31:56 補充:

    12: You should believe that God treats everybody farily. I believe that we still have a chance.

    37: Enough!!! God God God! Why do you have to talk about God all the time?

    2007-06-01 23:32:06 補充:

    28: Uhm... it is a very hard situation and you are too optimistic...

    36: Is it possible that your God will love everyone without asking for return for ever?

    37: Yeah... I wanna know that too...

    2007-06-01 23:33:40 補充:

    Scene4

    I cannot be the one to die. I have so many things to do to keep the company going. Bankrupt is the last thing I would allow to happen when I'm in charge of the company. There are so many people need their jobs too...

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