倩羽 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫忙翻一下英文.主題是”玩具”意思合理文句流暢.不要翻譯軟體

Toys

Toys bring delight, fun and learning to children, but they can also

be a source of injury.

• Check that toys are in good repair and free of sharp edges, pinch

points, splinters or broken parts.

• Repair or discard broken toys immediately so that scratches,

cuts and scrapes are avoided.

• Err on the side of caution when purchasing toys with small parts

for young children.

• Avoid the possibility of chocking by supervising very carefully

when children are using small objects such as crayons, marbles,

small bolts and beautiful junk!

• Ensure that young children do not have access to toys with

strings or cords longer than 6" (15 cm) to prevent strangulation.

• Think about using festive streamers rather than balloons which

can break and lodge in children's throats.

• Avoid toy boxes with lids as these can cause injury by falling

and pinching.

Teach children to replace toys in baskets, plastic tubs, cupboards

or shelves to eliminate tripping and falling over scattered items.

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試試用節慶旗幟取代氣球避免氣球傷害或是卡住小孩的喉嚨

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Toys玩具

    Toys bring delight, fun and learning to children, but they can also be a source of injury.

    雖然玩具給兒童帶來歡樂、趣味和學習,但他們也可能是傷害(兒童)的根源。

    註:a是在英文文法裡的不定冠詞並不等同數詞的”一”有時候在譯成中文時予以省略後,讀起來反而覺得順口。

    • Check that toys are in good repair and free of sharp edges, pinch points, splinters or broken parts.

    檢查玩具是否修復良好,且無銳利的邊縁、夾揑人的尖頭,刺片或破損的零部件。

    註:1. pinch是指”夾、揑”而pinch points組成複合名詞時,有伸為” 夾揑(人、物)的尖頭”的意思2. splinters 在此是指”(類似木、竹等的)細片、刺”的意思。

    • Repair or discard broken toys immediately so that scratches, cuts and scrapes are avoided.

    立即修復或拋棄破損的玩具,俾使得以避免抓傷、割傷或擦傷。

    註:scratches, cuts and scrapes在此皆是名詞。

    • Err on the side of caution when purchasing toys with small parts for young children.

    給小孩購買附小零件玩具的時候,盼勿粗心大意!

    註:Err是指”犯錯誤、出差錯”而erred on the side of caution 是作”錯在不小心”解釋。

    • Avoid the possibility of chocking by supervising very carefully when children are using small objects such as crayons, marbles, small bolts and beautiful junk!

    當小孩還在玩小的物品,諸如,蠟筆、彈珠、小螺栓、漂亮的廢舊物時,要細心地在一旁監護,以避免兒童一旦吞食而噎住。

    註:possibility of chocking是指”一旦噎住”的意思。

    • Ensure that young children do not have access to toys with strings or cords longer than 6" (15 cm) to prevent strangulation.

    確保兒童無法拿取到所附線或索長超過 6吋(15公分)的玩具,以防阻發生勒斃情事。

    • Think about using festive streamers rather than balloons which can break and lodge in children's throats.

    考量用節日喜慶的飄帶(長流旗)而不用氣球,因其可能破裂而卡在兒童的喉嚨裡。

    註:streamers是指”飄帶、長流旗” 的意思。

    • Avoid toy boxes with lids as these can cause injury by falling and pinching.

    避免有蓋子的玩具盒,由於他們倒落下來夾壓(到兒童)時可能造成傷害。

    註:toy boxes是指”收納玩具的盒子”的意思。

    Teach children to replace toys in baskets, plastic tubs, cupboards or shelves to eliminate tripping and falling over scattered items.

    教導兒童將玩具放回到籃子、塑膠桶、櫃子或是架子內,以排除被凌亂物品絆倒的機會 。

    註:eliminate是指”消除、排除”的意思。

    參考資料: 英文,文法,常識及字典
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    5 年前

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  • 1 0 年前

    玩具

    玩具可以替小孩帶來歡樂、有趣以及學習,但是卻也是對小孩造成傷害的另外一種來源。

    * 檢查玩具是否修復完整,不要有尖銳的邊,容易造成刺痛的部分,碎片或是破損的部分

    * 立即修復或是丟棄破損的玩具,這樣才可以避免被割到或是刮傷。

    * 當購買玩具附有小零件的時候,避免讓小孩有惡作劇的行為

    * 當小孩還在玩小的物件,例如:蠟筆、彈珠、小螺栓、漂亮的廢棄物時,

    必須有人在旁邊小心的監護,才可以避免小孩造成吞食。

    * 確認小孩的玩具沒有超過 15 公分的線,避免造成勒斃窒息的現象

    * 試試用節慶旗幟取代氣球避免氣球傷害或是卡住小孩的喉嚨

    * 避免把玩具盒放在小孩容易絆倒受傷的地方

    * 教導小孩子把玩具收到籃子、塑膠桶、櫃子或是架子,降低被凌亂物品絆倒的機會

    參考資料: 自己
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