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英文自我介紹...請各位大大幫忙修正...

Hi, everyone my name is XXX

I live in XXX where is near by here.

And I am the oldest child in my family.

I am an absent-minded person. I have heard my parents and my friends say over and over again “your mind is like a sieve.” I usually forget everything, for example keys, wallets, cell phone, even my satchel.

But, I think I am so lucky. Because , I remember to breath.

In most of my free time, I often spend a lot of time in watching TV. I like it very much. That is why I wear glasses. I also enjoy taking exercise. In every Sunday my dad, my brother and I are playing basketball and badminton together. And in this summer vacation I plan to learn tennis and find a part-time job.

希望可以修順一點

還有更改一些文法錯誤

我希望在加一些句子

"希望這個暑假可以過的很充實"

還有

"我是個標準的電視兒童,整天就是扒著電視不放"

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Hi, everyone my name is XXX

    I live in XXX which is near by.

    And I am the oldest child in my family.

    I am an absent-minded person. I have heard my parents and my friends say over and over again "your mind is like a sieve.” I usually forget everything, for example keys, wallets, cell phone, even my satchel.

    But, luckily I remember to breath.

    During my free time, I spend most of it watching TV.

    I like it very much. That is the reason why I wear glasses.

    I also enjoy excercising. Every Sunday, my dad, my brother and I play basketball and badminton together. I plan on learning tennis during this summer vacation. I would also like to find a part-time job.

    希望可以修順一點

    還有更改一些文法錯誤

    我希望在加一些句子

    "希望這個暑假可以過的很充實"

    I hope that this summer vacation will be fulfilling to me. >>>NOT filfull<<<<

    還有

    "我是個標準的電視兒童,整天就是扒著電視不放"

    I am a typical TV junky, who spends whole day on front of the television.

    同學, 有幾點要注意.

    1. 電視兒童及忘東忘西 並不可愛或討人喜歡.

    2. 如果你要以上述的自傳介紹自己, good luck!

    3. 希望你以後會是個有用的人

  • 1 0 年前

    what kind of chance you will introduce yourself by the draft? I don't think that is good idea to tell smoeone your are an absent-minded person.

    by the way, the sentence you want to know are as below.

    Hope this summer vacation can be very fillful.

    TV just like my parents, I always stay with it all day.

    參考資料: ..................
  • Jay
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    Hi, everyone my name is XXX

    I live in XXX near by here.

    (口語的話不要太文謅謅, where is去掉)

    And I am the first child in my family.

    (不要中翻英直翻@@,oldest 改 first)

    I am an absent-minded person. I have heard my parents and my friends say over and over again “your mind is like a sieve.” I usually forget something, for example keys, wallets, cell phone, even my satchel.

    But, I think I am so lucky. Because , I remember to breathe.

    (breath 改成 breathe,動詞)

    In most of my free time, I spend a lot of time in watching TV. I can't live without TV. That is why I wear glasses. I also enjoy taking exercise. In every Sunday my dad, my brother and I are playing basketball and badminton together. And in this summer vacation I plan to learn tennis and find a part-time job. It would be a wonderful summer vocation.

    沒改多少, 儘量照原義, 有些地方改的我就不注明了。

    參考資料: 自己
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