peggy hsu 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請修改我不順的句子~英文實在不怎麼好

A:When age increases, Teenagers start to focus on their appearance whether it's cool

or not. However, what does cool mean? Teenagers in modern world think that cool

is to hair-dying.

B:Look! This is my new hair style. It is very cool, right?

C:I think this color suit you very much.

B:Really, thank you very much.

A:Do you think dye hair is very cool?

B:I think dye hair is very cool. Dying hair can let you look younger.

C:Recently, more and more people like change their hair color. They want to them look very different.

B:If you want to dye hair, what color do you like?

A:Let me see. Flax color!

C:What is flax color mean?

B:It is a color like light brown mix a little green.

A:It sounds great!

C:But I ever heard when you choose red, black or brown excessive switching of hair colors may damage to your hair.

B:Because it is too frequency.

A:What do you mean by frequency?

B:It is mean happen very often.

A:OK, I see.

B:what can we do if we want to dye hair but we do not want to damage our hair?

C:You should read the instructions carefully.

A:When you walk on the road, you look many younger dye strange color. How do you think?

B:I think he has strong personal style.

A:Do you mean dye hair also show personal style?

B:Yes, people choose color could look what type of this person.

C:How do we choose color suit us?

B:If you are an outgoing person, you can choose light color. For example, brown, fresh blue. On the other hand, you could try some dark color, dark blue, deep maroon.

A:What is maroon like?

B:A color tend towards brown and mix red.

C:I think teenager want to show different and do some things that feel cool, but they forget real cool should be spread out from inside but not just your appearance.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    A:When age increases, Teenagers start to focus on their appearance whether it's cool or not. However, what does cool mean? Teenagers in modern world think that cool is to dye their hair.

    B:Look! This is my new hair style. Isn’t it cool?

    C:I think this color very suit you.

    B:Really, thanks a lot!

    A:Do you think to dye the hair is cool?

    B:I think to dye the hair is very cool. Dying hair can make you looks younger.

    C:Recently, more and more people like to change their hair color. They want them to look different.

    B:If you want to dye your hair, which color do you prefer?

    A:Let me think... Flax color!

    C:What is “flax color” mean?

    B:It is light brown mix a little bit green.

    C:It sounds great!

    A:But I’ve heard when you excessive switching the hair colors, that may damage your hair.

    B:Because the frequency of dying the hair.

    C:OK, I see.

    B:What can we do if we want to dye our hair but we do not want to damage it?

    A:You should read the instructions carefully.

    When you walk on the street and you see many young people with strange color. How do you think about that?

    B:I think they have strong personality.

    A:Do you mean dying the hair also shows personality?

    B:Yes. I think the color people choose can also show the personality.

    C:How can we choose the color which is suits us?

    B:If you are an outgoing person, you can choose the light colors. For example: the brown or the fresh blue. On the contrary, you can pick dark color, like dark blue or deep maroon.

    A:What is maroon like?

    B:Maroon is brown mix with purple and red.

    C:I think teenagers want them to be different and do something that is cool. But they forget to be cool should look inside of each other not just the appearances.

    我想你有一點角色錯亂所以我改了一點…

    而有一些雖然沒有錯誤但是很少人會這樣子用,所以我也改掉了,看這樣子行不行!

    參考資料: ME
  • 1 0 年前

    A:When age increases, teenagers start focusing on their appearance whether it's cool or not. However, what does cool mean? Teenagers in modern world think the cool is hair-dying.

    B:Look! This is my new hair style. It’s cool, right?

    C:I think this color suit you very well.

    B:Really, thank you very much.

    A:Do you think dying hair is cool?

    B:I think dying hair is very cool. Dying hair can make you look younger.

    C:Now more and more people like to change their hair color. They want to look different.

    B:If you want to dye hair, what color will pick?

    A:Let me see. Flax color!

    C:What dose flax color mean?

    B:It is light brown mix with a little green.

    A:It sounds great!

    C:But I heard when you excessive switching hair colors may damage your hair.

    B:Because it is too frequency.

    A:What do you mean by frequency?

    B:It means do it too often.

    A:Oh, I see.

    B:What can we do if we want to dye hair but we do not want to damage our hair?

    C:You should follow the instructions carefully.

    A:I think, when you walk on the street with strange hair color will make you look a lot younger. How do you think?

    B:I think, it shows a strong personality.

    A:Do you mean dying hair also show personality?

    B:Yes. You can tell what personality they have from what kind of color they pick.

    C:How do we pick the color that can suit us?

    B:If you are an outgoing person, you can choose light color. For example; brown, and fresh blue. Beside that, you can also try some darker color. It’s like dark blue, deep maroon.

    A:What is maroon like?

    B:It’s like light brown mix with red.

    C:I think teenager want to be different and do something to look cool, but they forget being cool is from your inside not just your appearance.

    參考資料: Myself (English Teacher)
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