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一段英文對話,請幫我修改錯誤的地方,謝謝!

(Have tow people in the depart longe at airport...)

A: Hi my name is XXX

B: My name is OOO ,nice to me you.

A: Today is not my day. My flight late four hours.

B: Are you reservation form HONG KONG to TAIWAN tour ticker?

A: Yes, It’s very unfortunate.

B: Me too.

A: But Taiwan is beautiful island.

B:I like visit on Kaohsiung city. There are many fun place, like 六合 night market Love liver and city light hall etc. I love there.

A: I agree , and I think Tuitung is not bed. It is nature city, have green mountain and clear liver and wild animals. I like at Tuitung enjoy my life.

B: Sounds great. Maybe I need to countryside enjoy my life.

A:(see watch) OH! We are about to late.

B: OK! We are let's go to Taiwan right now.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    (Have tow people in the depart longe at airport...)

    => (Have two people in the departure lounge at airport)

    A: Today is not my day. My flight late four hours.

    => Today is not my day. My flight is late for four hours.

    B: Are you reservation form HONG KONG to TAIWAN tour ticker?

    =>Did you make the reservation for the flight from Hong Kong to Taiwan?

    A: Yes, It’s very unfortunate.

    =>Yes, it’s very unfortunate for the schedule delay.

    B:I like visit on Kaohsiung city. There are many fun place, like 六合 night market Love liver and city light hall etc. I love there.

    =>I like visiting Kaohsiung city. There are many wonderful places, such as Liu-hou night market, Love river and Urban spotlight (城市光廊), etc. I love there.

    A: I agree , and I think Tuitung is not bed. It is nature city, have green mountain and clear liver and wild animals. I like at Tuitung enjoy my life.

    =>I agree with you. I think Taitung (台東是嗎?) is not bad as well. It is an amazing place with nature views of green mountain, river with clear water and wild animals. I like to stay there to enjoy my life.

    B: Sounds great. Maybe I need to countryside enjoy my life.

    =>Sounds great. Maybe I need to go to countryside to enjoy my life.

    A:(see watch) OH! We are about to late.

    =>(look at watch) Oh! It's about time. We are going to be late.

    B: OK! We are let's go to Taiwan right now.

    =>Ok! Let's go to take a flight to Taiwan now.

    2007-06-05 21:33:04 補充:

    => Today is not my day. My flight is late for four hours.

    此句修改為Today is not my day. My flight has been late for four hours.

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    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    (''There are two '' people in the “departure lounge /departure lobby“at airport...)

    A: Hi, my name is XXX

    B: My name is OOO ,nice to me you.

    A: Today is not my day. My flight '' has been'' late ''for four'' hours.

    B: '' Do you have your'' reservation form HONG KONG to TAIWAN

    ''with'' tour '' ticket'' ?

    A: Yes, It's very unfortunate.

    B: Me too.

    A: But Taiwan is beautiful island.

    B: I like '' to '' visit ''不用介系詞“ Kaohsiung city.There are many “funny'' place. '' such as/for example'' 六合 night market, Love liver and city light hall...... etc. I love there.

    A: I agree , and I think '' Taitung'' is '' also'' not bed. It is nature city, have green mountain and clear '' river '' and wild animals. I like ''to live in'' Taitung '' to'' enjoy my life.

    B: ''That sounds '' great. Maybe I need to ''see'' countryview/countryside '' to '' enjoy my life.

    A:(see watch) OH! We are ''almost'' / ''about to'' late.

    B: OK! ''We are刪去'' Let's go to Taiwan right now.

    2007-06-05 21:08:40 補充:

    “.......“內的文字為修改處

    參考資料: 美語、我和菊子的一生, 美語二、我和菊子的一生
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