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英文信這樣寫可以嗎?

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Dear April,

I travel to Thailand with my college classmates these days before we graduation.

So I’m writing this postcard on a boat in Mae Nam River . In a half hour later, our boat is going to pull in to shore. Along the Mae Nam River , it is floating market all the way. And we are going to go back to Bangkok , and return to Taiwan .

We had a special experience in this travel, that is, we experienced their New Year. They celebrate the New Year by getting wet. They come outside, no matter young or old, male and female, all with buckets, hoses, squirt guns and anything else that will hold water, and then go about dousing each other. No one is safe.

Therefore, at this time, I want to introduce the Thai Water Festival to you. Such wild celebrations actually take place all over Southeast Asia, but it’s most famous in Thailand . The water has special symbolic meaning: it cleans, purifies and renews, not just physically, but also spiritually, to wash away all the bad things of the past year and to bring good things for the New Year.

Is it wonderful? You should come here to undergo this unique celebration!

Truly yours,

Tiffany

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    Dear April,

    I am traveling in Thailand with my college classmates these days before our graduation. We are going to go back to Bangkok soon, then return to Taiwan.

    So I’m writing this postcard in a boat on Mae Nam River . In about half an hour, our boat will pulling in ashore. There are floating markets all the way along the Mae Nam River.

    We had a special experience during this travel, that is, we experienced their New Year celebration. Thailand people celebrate their New Year by getting wet. People young and old, male and female, all go outside with buckets, hoses, squirt guns and everything else which holds water, and go about dousing each other. No one is safe.

    Also, at this time, I want to introduce the Thai Water Festival to you. Such wild celebrations actually take place all over Southeast Asia, but it is most famous in Thailand . The water has special symbolic meaning. It cleans, purifies and renews, not just physically but also spiritually. It washes away all the bad things of the past year and to bring good things for the New Year.

    Is it wonderful? You should come here to undergo this unique celebration!

    Truly yours,

    Tiffany

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