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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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of course,we can keep our healthy from eat less.We can only eat the 營養 foods and eatto full. Don't eat too much because our stomach feel full to the brain that have to spend 20 minutes. After 20 mintues, our brain wiil feel the 飽足感. So,we can try to eat slowly.

We are not only eat less food but also eat less the sugar. Because we eat too much suger that add our body 負擔. The suger doesn't help our healthy. However, I think that every one like drink. We can try to 1/2 or 1/3 sugers of the drink. It will better than all suger.

Finally, the other point that we can eat less meat that can help the earth. It's a specail thing.

In concilsin, we are eat less that can keep our body sharp. And we will have nice healthy. We also can portect the earth.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    People could keep their body healthy by eating less. Actually only eating the nutritious foods could also make people feel satiation. Human's brain always detects the feeling of satisfaction later than the stomach for 20 minutes. Therefore, if people could eat foods slowly, their brain and stomach could recognize the feeling of satiation at the same time.

    If we could eat less, we could also reduce the quantity of sugar, which might be absorbed from foods. Too much sugar would be a heavy burden to our body which certainly will be harmful to our health. However, we always could not resist to have a drink, especially at summer. We can try to reduce the quantity of sugar, say 1/2 or 1/3 of the original amount, in order to maintain our health.

    Finally, the other point that we can eat less meat that can help the earth. It's a specail thing. (你想講的是什麼?? 吃的少可以幫助地球??)

    In sum, eating less not only could let people keep shape, but also could have people maintain good health. Meantime, we also can protect the earth.

    其實我不太懂你整篇文章想表達的是什麼耶

  • 1 0 年前

    We can keep our healthy from eat less of course. We can only eat the nutrious foods until full. Don't eat too much because our stomack feels ful to the brain have to spend 20 minutes. After 20 minutes, our brain will realize the fullness, so we have to try to eat slowly.

    We are not only eat less food, but also eat less sugar becaue we eat too much sugar that can burden our body. The sugar doesn't help our healthy. However, I think everyone like drink. We can try 1/2 or 1/3 sugars of drinks. It will be better than all sugar.

    Secondarily, the other point that we can eat less meat that can help the earth. It's a special thing.

    In conclusion, eat less can still keep our body sharp and will have a healthy body. We also can protect the earth.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    Because of our better nutrition can keep our healthy form diet. Don't be eat too much so our stomach feel satiety that have spend 20 minutes to digest. So we can try to eat slowly.

    We are not only to diet and also eat less the sugar which add our body workload. The suger doesn't help our healthy if anyone like to drink something, they can put 1/2 or 1/3 of sugers to drink.

    Finally, on the other hand we can eat less meat that can help the earth.

    It is so a import thing.

    In conciliate we can eat less that can keep body sharp and will keep nice healthy. We also can portech the earth.

  • 1 0 年前

    of course,we can make ourselves healthy by eating less(keep from : 避免.抑制.忍住不做….戒掉).We can only eat 營養 food(不可數!) and eat just enough. Can't(較佳) eat too much because it has to spend our 20 minutes that our stomach makes our brain feel 飽足感. After 20 mintues, our brain will feel 飽足感. Because of this,we had better(had better : 最好) try to eat slowly.

    We should eat food apropos(apropos:恰當地) and less sugar. Because it will add 負擔 to our body if we eat too much.Too much suger may hurt our health. However, I think that everyone like drink. We can put 1/2 or 1/3 spoon of suger in the drink. It will better than much suger.

    Finally, we can eat less meat that to save the Earth. It's a specail thing.(<-???)

    In concilsin(這是什麼字?), we are eat apropos that can keep our body figure good. And we will have nice health. We also can portect the earth.

    2007-06-14 13:43:42 補充:

     Can't(較佳) eat too much because …

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