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Seize the Day

Every day is panticular if we take good advantage of it and treasure eveny minute in daily life Seize the day just like seize the every oportunities surriund you . Once you missed , you will lose a chace to enjoy the wonderful of life .

It is a blessing for me to be borned in a happy family . Hence , I extremly value what I have possess including my loving family and happiness life nowadays , I phomise myself to seize the day with a positive attitude toward life whether it is pleasant or not . Just cherish all those things in life and we will learn a lot from them .

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  • 1 0 年前
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    panticular 要改成 particular。

    ......eveny minute in daily life .

    Seize the day 要改成 Seizing the day

    oportunities surriund 要改成 opportunities surround

    Once you missed 要改成 Once you miss

    .......chace to enjoy the wonderful of life . 要改成 chance to enjoy a wonderful life .

    .......what I have possess including my .......要改成 ....what I have including my .....{因為posses是動詞}

    , I phomise myself to seize the day with .......要改成....... . I promise myself to seize the day with......

    應該是這樣了吧!大部分是拼錯了~~~

    要繼續加油喔!!

    參考資料: 我自己一字一字的看
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