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(急) 請問能幫校正英文對話嘛? 贈20點感謝^^

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E: This episode is about Emma and Rebecca carried some cards to meet Mr. Wong.

W: Yup, they want Vincent come back to their program.

E: So they take the cards to give Vincent ,the cards is the another kids drawing.

W: Alex and Vincent is a good friend! So Alex drawing of two boys smile, they are very closely.

E: Vincent saw the cards feel happy. But Mr. Wong still disagree Vincent come back to program.

W: Mr. Wong tells to Emma [frankly], He think parents must protect children.

E: Emma says she always have to [deal with prejudice], but she got through it.

W: Yup, Emma is a good sample.

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E: Rebecca give Alex and Vincent free Guitar Lessons.

W: Free of charge? Why she do this?

E: Rebecca think she need to responsible for Vincent.

W: This is good for Vincent and Alex. They can keep there friendship.

E: Maybe, no too long, because Alex’s mother want to take him to Los Angles. Ramon and Alex must feel a pain.

W: And Alex expects Ramon have a date with Rebecca.

E: Yup, but he still worried about Alex’s [ward ship].

W: He decide go back to [court over it].

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Yup, they want Vincent "to" come back to their program.

    修正:

    So they gave the cards to Vincent. The cards were drawn by other kids.

    修正: Alex and Vincent are good friends! That's why Alex drew the picture of two boys on the card showing that they are very close to each other.

    E: Vincent saw the cards feel happy. But Mr. Wong still disagree Vincent come back to program.

    修正: Vincent felt happy when he saw the card. But Mr. Wong still doesn't want Vincent to come back to the program.

    W: Mr. Wong tells to Emma [frankly], He think parents must protect children.

    修正:Mr. Wong tells Emma frankly that he thinks that parents must protect children.

    E: Emma says she always have to [deal with prejudice], but she got through it.

    Emma says she always has to deal with prejudice issues, but she has gone through it.

    W: Yup, Emma is a good sample.

    (d)

    E: Rebecca give Alex and Vincent free Guitar Lessons.

    修正: Rebecca gives Alex and Vincent free guitar lessons.

    W: Free of charge? Why she do this?

    修正:Are the lessons free of charge? Why does she do this for us?

    E: Rebecca think she need to responsible for Vincent.

    修正: Rebecca thinks that she needs to be responsible for Vincent.

    W: This is good for Vincent and Alex. They can keep there friendship.

    修正: there --> their, friendship--> friendships

    E: Maybe, no too long, because Alex’s mother want to take him to Los Angles. Ramon and Alex must feel a pain.

    修正: Maybe not too long. Because Alex's mom wants to take him to Los Angles. Ramon and Alex must feel sad about it.

    W: And Alex expects Ramon have a date with Rebecca.

    修正: And Alex expects Ramon to have a date with Rebecca.

    E: Yup, but he still worried about Alex’s [ward ship].

    修正: Yup,but he still worries about Alex's ward ship.

    W: He decide go back to [court over it].

    修正: He decided to go back to count over it.

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