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英文文法修正~ 急 謝謝各位

KOBE BRYANT,my favorite basketball player. i think he's a god who Jesus send to teach people how to play basketball.

since i watch he play in nba, IT'S already 11 years. the sight of his back on the court, It's my ambition all the time

Even i know that is a long distance forever.

Every his move, jump shoots, LAY UPs, feints, dunks,blocks, and he is a greatest Ankle breaker TOO,

Especially he is a bravely Buzzer beater. his confidence, dominating, all are so charismatic.

麻煩請各位幫我修正哪邊文法有出錯的,謝謝!

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  • Sonia
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    1 0 年前
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    KOBE BRYANT,my favorite basketball player. i think he's a god who Jesus send to teach people how to play basketball.

    >>My favorite basketball player is Kobe Bryant. I think he is a god whom Jesus sends to teach people how to play basketball.

    since i watch he play in nba, IT'S already 11 years. the sight of his back on the court, It's my ambition all the time

    Even i know that is a long distance forever.

    >>I have watched him play in NBA for 11 years. It's my ambition all the time to have a sight of his back on the court. Even I know it's a long distance forever.

    Every his move, jump shoots, LAY UPs, feints, dunks,blocks, and he is a greatest Ankle breaker TOO,

    Especially he is a bravely Buzzer beater. his confidence, dominating, all are so charismatic.

    >>It's really cool of every his move, jump shoots, lay ups, and feints. He is also a greatest breaker. Furthermore, it's charismatic of his confidence and dominating. Especially he is a bravely Buzzer beater.

  • 你一定要選 kobe嗎? @@

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