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A 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可以幫我看一下文法嗎?謝謝喔

Althougt I have said I over you but it still has one place belong you,

and I found I don't know what kind of person you are after I observed

your state in MSN for several days,

when you type somewords about bad language,

I was frightened,

but I think you are so serious,

and design fill your all life.

I might damn you secretly in my mind,

becouse you seem hate to talk with me in MSN,

but you have a reason which doesn't let me give up you is your efforts.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    如有意會錯誤﹐請見諒!

    Although I said I was over you, but there is still a special place that belongs

    to you in my heart.

    雖然我說我已不再想你﹐但你在我心深處仍然是特別的。

    I found out that I didn't know you after I observed you on MSN for several

    days, where I saw you use some bad language.

    在MSN線上觀察了你幾天。當我看到你用骯髒的字眼時﹐我發覺我並不是那麼的了解你。

    I was frightened, but I know that you are so serious about living a fulfilling life.

    我有些害怕﹐但我知道你是那麼的認真的設法充實你的人生。

    I might condemn you secretly in my mind, because you seem to hate to talk

    to me on MSN.

    雖然我有點恨你﹐因為你似乎不太喜歡跟我在MSN聊天。

    But you give me reason not to give up, and that is your efforts.

    但你的努力讓我不會對你放棄。

    參考資料: 自己
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  • 1 0 年前

    Although I said I over you, there is a place belong to you in my heart.

    I don't know what kind of person you are after I observed. You had been shown your status by MSN for several days. I was frightened when I saw some words in bad language you typed in the MSN. I might damn you secretly in my mind, because you seem to hate talking with me in MSN. There is a reason why I couldn’t abandon you is your efforts.

    but I think you are so serious, and design fill your all life.(不好意思,我實在是無法悟出其中之意….)

    我的英文能力也不是說很好,這是我幾經思考跟修改的想法,不敢保證一定都對。如果可以,也希望哪位大哥大姊,可以跟小妹說,我修改的內容,何處不切當或是用法錯誤,謝謝!

    參考資料: 我、字典
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  • 1 0 年前

    嗯..我的英文沒有說特別好

    不過..第一個字應該是"雖然"-Although吧?

    如果是的話,拼錯了.

    而且如果真的是的話,"有雖然就不能有但

    是,有但是就不能有雖然",最後2句也是,"有

    因為就不能有所以,有所以就不能有因為"

    (這算是文法吧?!)

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