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請幫我修改自傳,謝謝 很急..20點

After I graduated from XXX University, I served Assistant Engineer

in XXX, after that I served Reception Personnel in OOO. I am an easy person to get along with, and I like to make friends. When I held a post in OOO, I tried to treat all colleagues and visitors as my friends. So I had a happy work experience in these times. I also learned how to conduct myself well and my dealing

My favorite hobbies are travelling and enjoying foods. So I like to go to countryside on holiday. And I also like to dine together with my friends. Recently, I have used my leisure time to learn English. In this way, I hope my English is getting better.

大概內容是說~我畢業於XX大學之後就到XX公司工作,之後又到OOO公司擔任總機接待,然後我是一個容易相處的人

我喜歡旅行和享受美食,目前有在補習英文,希望自己英文會更進步

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非常謝謝

但是關於I have used my some of my leisure time to learn English. 有點疑問耶~~~

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  • 1 0 年前
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    I served as an assistant engineer in XXX after graduating from XXX University. Afterwards, I worked as a reception personnel in OOO. I am an easygoing person, and I like to make friends, too. When I held a post in OOO, I tried to treat all colleagues and visitors as my friends. So, I had a happy experience in OOO. I also learned how to conduct myself well and to sharpen my dealing skills.

    My favorite hobbies are traveling and enjoying delicacy. I like to go to countryside on holiday. And, I like to dine with my friends. Recently, I have "spent" my leisure time (on) learning English at cram school. I hope my English proficiency will become better and better.

    PS:大致上說來,我盡其所能,但,如有改進之處,有賴高手進一步指導.

    參考資料: I
  • 1 0 年前

    After I graduated from XXX University, I will work as an assistant Engineer in XXX, after that, I worked as a Reception Personnel in OOO. I am an easy-going person who always gets along with people easliy, and I like to make friends too. When I held a post in OOO, I treat all colleagues and visitors as my friends. So I had a happy working experience in OOO. I also learned how to conduct myself well and also my dealing skills as well.

    My favorite hobbies are travelling and foods tasting. So I like to go to the countryside on holidays. And I also like to dine with my friends. Recently, I have used my some of my leisure time to learn English. By doing so, I hope my English is progressing better.

    參考資料: me me me!!!
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