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幫我改通順一點~要像一篇作文~很急~現在就要~感激不盡

請各位幫我再加字~我要250字~現在只有125

幫我改通順一點~要像作文那樣順~

加連接詞等等的~謝謝幫忙

很急~現在要~明天要交的

When I saw someone transitive leaflet to me, I never took, because that no use for me, so I never took. But if someone transitive leaflet to me, I'll take. Why?

Because of that I used to do an part time job before two years ago. The job is stand outside transitive leaflet to passerby in the road. Maybe the job needs two or three hours but without finish that in the time. You only needs to do is do your best. I feel tired that needs to stand all the time and keep transitive leaflet to someone but not everyone took.

In conclusion, I think I used to be the job so I know their hard. I'll take that now when they give me.

感謝各位幫我

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  • Fency
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    我幫你改了一些:

    In general, most of people do not like to take a leaflet from someone who is standing on the street and try to hand it to the people that pass by. Most leaflets are commercial advertisement. They are really useless to me. But I take the leaflet if someone hands it to me. I always have a positive view towards these hard working people who stand on the streets regardless weather.

    The reason I always take the leaflets from people is because I used to do this types of part time jobs two years ago. The job was to stand outside of a business building and distribute all kinds of commercial leaflets to people passing by. Most of time, I need to spend between two and three hours to finish a stack of leaflets. Sometime, if there were not many people on the street or people that do not want to take it from me, it will take even longer to finish the job.

    A job handing leaflets to people walking on the streets is not a fun job. It requires long hours of standing with a minimum pay if you can finfish a pile of leaflet in time. Some people appreciate this kind of advertisement but most people do not.

    Based on past experiences, I always want to help people by taking a leaflet when it is handed to me. I really like to help these young people build confidence and responsibility.

    2007-06-25 11:16:33 補充:

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  • 1 0 年前

    When I saw someone distributed a fly to me, I never took it , because i thought that was no use for me, so I never took it. But now,if someone distributes a fly to me, I'll take it. you know Why?

    Because of that I had a part time job which i distributed the fliers to passersby in the road two years ago. Maybe the job took two or three hours without finishing it in the time. You only needed to do was to do your best. at that time, I was tired of standing outdoor all the time and keeping distributing the fliers to passersby who did not took them, though.

    In conclusion, I know its difficulty since i have this kind of experience. And now I'll take the flyer when they give me.

    這一句我看不懂,拍謝Maybe the job took two or three hours without finishing it in the time. You only needed to do was to do your best

    參考資料: MYSELF
  • 1 0 年前

    請問這篇短文的題目是什麼?

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