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The Most Important Person in My Life

I have a good friend; we know each other since I was born. She is short and heavy, but she is very cute. She is fifty-three years old, but her heart is just like a child. She is my mother, but when we stand together, everyone said that we like sisters. Although we have different personalities and different thinking, we still learn others advantages and support each other.

I always tell my mom something in my mind. We can discuss my father and my boyfriend, and compare their body figure, face and personality. We can talk about which entertainer is funny and ugly, then we will ridicule him together. Every night, before I go to sleep, I call my mother and tell her what happened to me everyday. If I tell good things to her, she will feel happy with me, but if I tell some bad things, my mother will tell me how to solve this problem and give me some suggestions. My mother takes care of me carefully. I remember that last time I felt uncomfortable and I should be in hospital. My mom was worried about me and slept in the hospital with me until I recovered to health. I felt touched and I felt sorry that I didn’t take good care of myself.

My mother is the most important person in my life. She is the greatest woman that I have ever seen. She takes both roles of father and mother, and brings me up by herself. My mother is older and older, and I continuously grow up. I didn’t study in my home town, so we have fewer and fewer time to get together. I should give my mother a wonderful life and obey her. She is the best mother in the world. She is not only the most important person in my life, but also the one I most love.

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    The Most Important Person in My Life

    I have a good friend; we've known each other since I was born. She is short, heavy, but cute. She is fifty-three years old, but her heart is just like a child. She is my mother. When we stand together, everyone says that we are just like sisters. Although we have different personalities and different ways of thinking, we still learn the other's advantages and support each other.

    I always tell my mom everything in my mind. We discuss my father and my boyfriend in terms of comparing their body figures, faces and personalities. We also talk about which entertainers are funny and ugly; then we laugh at them together. Before I go to sleep, I call my mother and tell her what happened to me in every single day. She always feels happy with me when I've encountered something nice. but if I haven't, my mother advises me the solutions.

    My mother takes good care of me. I remember, last time, I felt uncomfortable so I had to stay in a hospital for several days. My mom was so worried about me that she decided to stay with me in the hospital until I recovered. I felt touched and I felt sorry for not taking good care of myself.My mother is the most important person in my life. She is the greatest woman that I have ever seen. She plays both roles of a father and a mother, and brings me up all by herself.

    My mother is getting older and older, and I am growing up. I don't study in my home town now, so we have fewer and fewer time to get together. I want to provide my mother with a wonderful life and an always-obedient daughter. She is the best mother in the world. She is not only the most important person in my life, but also the one I love the most.

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  • 1 0 年前

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    The Most Important Person in My Life

    The most important person in my life is my best friend, XXX(名字)

    She is short and cute like a doll and her smiles are like summer breeze.

    Even though she is fifty-three years old and I am XX(歲數),

    her appearance often mislead people to think us as sisters.

    We did have our moments because of the age gap,

    but we learn to respect and to support each other through the years.

    We talk about everything freely and openly,

    including my boyfriend and her husband.

    We even compare their lookings, body figures, and personalities just for fun. Sometimes we talk about movie stars or TV hosts and gossip

    about their love lifes when we are bored.

    I call XXX every night before I go to sleep to tell her about my day.

    She would feel happy for me if I had a great day. On the other hand,

    she would give me suggestions if I happen to encounter some problems

    that are difficult to solve.

    XXX cares about me very much. I remember that once I was very sick

    and I was admitted to a hospital, she stayed and took care of me at the

    hospital until I regained my health. Since then I realize how important

    she is in my life and I promise her not to let her worry about me again

    by taking a good care of myself.

    XXX is the greatest person that I have ever known. She has spent a lot

    of time and efforts on me selflessly so that I can be who I am and go for my dreams with any doubts. Since I have moved to another town for my

    education, we are now spending less and less time together.

    When she gets old, it would be my term to take care of her. I will give

    her all the happyness in the world because I love her.

    XXX is my best friend, the most important person in my life, and also

    the one whom I love the most. She is my mother.

    2007-06-25 22:05:40 補充:

    happyness打錯了 應為happiness--->剛看完當幸福來敲門被搞混了= =

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