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My Favorite Sport

My favorite sport is playing basketball. Because it’s my interesting and skill in my life. I very like play basketball in school with my classmates and Physical teacher. Therefore, my basketball’s technique become better.

I always watch the Physical TV program in the free time. No matter watch the USA or Taiwan’s player plays who I very like, too! His name is called Kobe Bryant’s man special. His ball technique that isn’t doubtful. There are many people like him very much.

Playing basketball help to be healthful and let my happy, so everybody should try it.

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Something I Will Not Do Again

I had wasted time during the past summer vacation. I spent lots of time playing computer games. I did nothing but playing computer games all the summer vacation. Although playing computer game helped me relax, it harm my sight. After the vacation, my sight became worse. I was addicted to the computer games. I couldn’t stop myself doing that.

But after the vacation, I got a lesson. I had spent so much time play on computer games that I had ignored my schoolwork, and I got very low grades on tests at the beginning of the semester. I realized that I had not only wasted much time but also done myself bad. I have known what I did wrong. Believe me, I won’t don anything like that again.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    關於文章這兩邊文章~我做了一些修改~你看看OK不OK~

    My Favorite Sport

    My favorite sport is playing basketball as it's my interest and skill in my life. I like to play basketball with my classmates and athletic teacher in the school. Therefore, my technique of the basketball has become better.

    I always watch the athletic TV program in the free time. No matter the match is plaied by the Amican or the Taiwanese player. I like Kobe Bryant especially. His technique is without a doubt. Many people like him very much.

    Playing basketball help to be healthful and make me happy and everybody should try it.

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    Something I Will Not Do Again

    I had wasted time during the past summer vacation. I spent lots of time to play the computer games. I did nothing but playing the computer games all the summer vacation. Although playing the computer game helped me mellow out but it harmed my sight. After the vacation, my sight is from better to worse. I was addicted to the computer games and I couldn’t stop myself to do that.

    I have learned an important lesson after the vacation. I had spent so much time on playing the computer games and ignored my schoolwork. So that I got a low grades on the tests at the beginning of the semester. I realized that I wasted much time and done myself bad. I know what I did wrong. Believe me, I won’t do that again.

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  • 1 0 年前

    這不是跟邱乃 得一樣嗎...? = =

  • 1 0 年前

    My Favorite Sport

    My favorite sport is basketball. Because I am good at playing it.

    I like to play basketball in the school with my classmates and the physical education teacher. Therefore, my basketball skills become better. I always watch basketball TV programs when I have time. I like to watch both American and Taiwanese basketball players. Among those players, Kobe Bryant is the most talented player. His basketball skills are undoubted. There are many people like him very much. Playing basketball helps me become healthier and happier. So, I highly recommend everyone to play basketball.

    Something I WOULD Not HAVE DONE Again

    I had wasted time during the LAST (PREVIOUS) summer BREAK. I spent lots of time playing computer games. I did nothing but playing computer games all the summer BREAK. Although playing computer game helped me relax, it HARMED my VISION. After the BREAK, my VISION became worse. I was addicted to computer games. I couldn’t stop myself doing that.

    But after the BREAK, I got a lesson. BECAUSE I spent so much time ON PLAYING computer games, I ignored my schoolwork. AS A RESULT, I got very low grades on tests at the beginning of the semester. I realized that I had not only wasted much time but also done myself bad. I have known what I did WAS wrong. Believe me, I WOULD NOT DO anything like that again.

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