維廷 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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First (Environmental protection)

Currently be subjected to the focus that the world pays attention to most is the problem that the iceberg melts. Once melt even Taiwan will also disappear. And what can we do for our ecosystems now? I feel we can start to do from whole environments. First is with do a very peripheral electrical appliance to use up and then turn off and pull out plug. Doing a good garbage classification is the second. For having already done good environmental protection us in the days to come just have beautiful environment can appreciate. Once the Earth suffers to break who can't also escape by luck. So environment problem have to everyone does together.

Second(Work resume)

Again shortly afterwards will have the possibility to be one's turn us to need to get employed. In the daily life we also often heard many examples of employments. DO not avoid the person whom we are regarded as and can't bear suffering. We should do like which? First is how first from the usage that school learned in the employment of actual situation up. The second license which is by passing in examination some nations. Actually the school is only a come on the line key. Works later attention is ability, ability is good you to be able upward to crawl. So no matter when it is we all need substantial. The economic recession is a fact. But do not have the completely strange economy, own to be supposed to take the responsibility also is necessary.

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第一篇(環境保護)

目前最受全球所關注的焦點就是冰山融化的問題。一但溶化連台灣也會消失。而我們現在能夠為我們的生態做些什麼呢?我覺得我們可以從週遭環境做起。首先是隨手做好週邊電器用完就關掉並且把插頭拔掉。第二則是做好垃圾分類。為有做好環境保護我們日後才有美麗的環境可以欣賞。一但地球遭受破壞誰也無法倖免。所以環境問題必須大家一起做。

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第二篇(工作履歷)

再過不久就有可能輪到我們需要就業。在日常生活中我們也常聽到許多就業的例子。未避免我們被當作不能吃苦的人。我們應做好哪些呢?首先是如何先從學校所學使用於就業的實務上。第二則是藉由考取一些國家之證照。其實學校只是進入工作的一把鑰匙。工作以後注重是能力,能力好你才能往上爬。所以不管何時我們都需充實自己。經濟不景氣是事實。但不要完全怪經濟,自己該負的責任也是必要的。

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  • jinlin
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
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    Chapter 1(Environmental protection)

    Right now, what the entire world focus its' attention to is the problem

    on the melting iceberg. Once it has melted, even Taiwan will vanished.

    And yet, what have we done to our ecosystems? I felt that we can start

    on with our environment. To begin with, switch off any electric

    equipments and unplug immediately after each use. Secondly, classify

    all garbage properly. If environmental protection is done properly, An

    attractive environment awaits us to enjoy for tomorrow. when the

    environment was exposed to damages then nobody can be evaded

    from this responsibility. A mutual cooperation is needed to set up a

    better environment.

    Chapter 2(Job resume)

    Shortly, it will be our turn to look for a job. we saw a lot of employment

    ads and to avoid being distinguished as "can't work under pressure"

    What should we do?To start with, make use of everything you have

    learn in school on the job. Secondly, apply for national licence in every

    field which will be advantage to you. School is only the key for being

    employed but your personal working ability is the step to future

    accomplishments. Despite the downfall of economy, we must continue

    to enrich our knowledge. We should not blame the economy, but fulfill

    our responsibility instead.

    我 依照你的原文再用我自己的方式翻譯希望有幫助~ ~ ~

  • 1 0 年前

    if you post 中文原文, then people can understand what you want to say and help you more.

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