yoyo 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文句子【改錯】

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1. His wish to succeed in many things are not realistic.

2. Many people excited by the news.

3. He had published many books since 1989.

4. I have lived here since I have been ten years old.

5. He is writing a letter when I visited him yesterday.

6. He is happy when he was informed of the good newa.

7. His effort is well appreciate.

8. We should pay attention to write good English sentences.

9. Among all of your students, whom you like most.

10.He loved by everyone.

11.This problem transformed into another problem.

12.This line connect to the sentral office.

13.President Lee will be appeared soon.

14.It will never be happened.

15.There is no possible of war.

16.It is hard to explain why did John fall.

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  • Jill
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. His wish to succeed in many things are not realistic.

    更正His wish to succeed in many things is not realistic.

    (因為前面主詞要視為一件事,所以用單數動詞)

    2. Many people excited by the news.

    更正Many people are excited by the news.

    (缺少be動詞)

    3. He had published many books since 1989.

    更正He has published many books since 1989.

    (因為時間還在繼續中,所以用現在完成式)

    4. I have lived here since I have been ten years old.

    更正I have lived here since I was ten years old.

    (since接的子句要用過去式)

    5. He is writing a letter when I visited him yesterday.

    更正He was writing a letter when I visited him yesterday.

    (因為發生在昨天,所以時態要一致,前面要用過去進行式)

    6. He is happy when he was informed of the good news.

    更正He was happy when he was informed of the good news.

    (同上題,因為發生在被告知的那時,所以用過去式)

    7. His effort is well appreciate.

    更正His effort is well appreciated.

    (他的努力被感激. 所以用被動式)

    8. We should pay attention to write good English sentences.

    更正We should pay attention to writing English sentences.

    (因為pay attention to 後面要接名詞,所以把 write 改為現在分詞)

    9. Among all of your students, whom you like most.

    更正Among all of your students, whom do you most?

    (後面是個問句,少了助動詞do)

    10.He loved by everyone.

    更正He is loved by everyone.

    (這句有被動的意思,要用被動語態)

    11.This problem transformed into another problem.

    更正This problem is transformed into another problem.

    (改為被動語態)

    12.This line connect to the central office.

    更正This line connects to the central office.

    (主詞是單數,所以動詞改為單數動詞)

    13.President Lee will be appeared soon.

    更正President Lee will appear soon.

    (這個句子要用主動語態)

    14.It will never be happened.

    更正It will never happen.

    (happen在這裡不用被動語態)

    15.There is no possible of war.

    更正There is no possibility of war.

    (possible 是形容詞,改為名詞possibility)

    16.It is hard to explain why did John fall.

    更正It is hard to explain why John fell.

    (因為是在句子裡的間接問句,所以助動詞要拿掉)

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    不好意思ㄛ....這是我去買的文法書...我已經寫完....對好答案...發現這幾題不懂....才會來問...並不是你說的"學校的功課應該自己寫 不然你也寫好了讓大家幫你改"不要會錯意...不要以為是你們寫我來抄喔....THX...

  • Kieve
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    1. His wish to succeed in many things are not realistic. (可以)

    2. Many people excited by the news.

    應該是: Many people "are" excited by the news.

    或: Many people excited by the news are calling the station.

    3. He had published many books since 1989. (可以)

    4. I have lived here since I have been ten years old.

    應該是:I have lived here since I "was" ten years old. (你已不再是十歲了)

    5. He is writing a letter when I visited him yesterday.

    應該是:He "was" writing a letter when I visited him yesterday. (他是昨天在寫信,所以應該用過去式)

    6. He is happy when he was informed of the good newa.

    應該是:He "was" happy when he was informed of the good "news". (因為是發生過的事所以用過去式)

    或:He is happy whenever he is informed of a good news.

    或:He is happy whenever he has been informed of a good news.

    7. His effort is well appreciate.

    應該是:His effort is well "appreciated". (因為 TO BE+V 時要用過去式的 V; is+appreciated)

    8. We should pay attention to write good English sentences.

    這一句很怪,不確定你的意思是什麼?

    可能是:We should pay attention (in order) to write better English sentences. 我們應該要專心才能寫出更好的英文句子。

    或:We should pay attention to "writing good sentences in English". 我們應該要專心來寫出好的英文句子。

    或:We should pay attention and write good sentences in English.

    我們應該要專心並寫出好的英文句子。

    9. Among all of your students, whom you like most. (口語化可以)

    比較好:Among all of your students, whom do you like the most?

    10.He loved by everyone.

    應該是:He "was loved" by everyone. 他被每一個人愛。

    或:He loved everyone. 他愛每一個人。

    或:Everyone loved him. 每一個人都愛他。

    11.This problem transformed into another problem.(可以)

    12.This line connect to the sentral office.

    應該是:This line "connects" to the "central" office. (單數的現在式動詞要加上s,中央 Central是C開頭,要不然 Sentral為專名就要用大寫。)也可以用過去式的"was connected"或 "has /had been connected"

    13.President Lee will be appeared soon.

    應該是: President Lee will be appearing soon. (未來進行式)

    或:President Lee will appear soon. (未來式)

    14.It will never be happened. (很怪,翻譯起來為:它將永遠不會已經在發生過)

    應該是: It will never happen. (它將永不發生)或 It never happened.(它從來沒發生過) 或 It will never be happening (它將永遠不會正在發生;不過這句很怪,所以還是不要用 be)

    2007-07-13 16:03:29 補充:

    15.There is no possible of war.

    應該是:There is no possibility of war.

    或:The war is not possible.

    或:There is not a possible war.

    2007-07-13 16:03:39 補充:

    16.It is hard to explain why did John fall.

    應該是:It is hard to explain why John fell.

    或:It is hard to explain: Why did John fall?

    或:It is hard to explain why John did fall.

    或:It is hard to explain why John had/has fallen.

    2007-07-13 16:10:23 補充:

    Sorry, 第一題應該是用 "is" not realistic. 第三和十一題要看前後文。

  • 1 0 年前

    如果是學校的功課應該自己寫

    不然你也寫好了讓大家幫你改

    都是我們寫那你不會的還是不會吧

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