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To Whom it May Concern:

I am I.T Superior of Information department. This department charge affairs regarding establishing a network management system for the purpose of achieving the goal of digitalization on remote control, maintenance, training, and relevant logistic automation.

Cheng-Wei Wu is a staff in this department.he had worked for The North Coast Partol Office of Taiwan Government Institution from November 2005 to November 2006. When he worked in The North Coast Partol Office.Cheng-Wei Wu has showing an outstanding for performance in our Information Department.His corresponding duties are shown as follows: Maintaing Work Flow System,Building The North Coast Patrol Office Communication-Equipment Management Information System,Introducing .NET and Framework establishing North Coast Patrol Office Systems, Maintaining The North Coast Patrol Office Video Conference System,Deployment and monitoring of active network gears.

Cheng-Wei Wu has excellent communication skills. In addition, he is extremely organized, reliable and computer literate. Cheng-Wei Wu can work independently and is able to follow through to ensure that the job gets done. He is flexible and willing to work on any project that is assigned to his.

Cheng-Wei Wu has my highest recommendation.

I highly recommend Cheng-Wei Wu as a candidate for you.

Sincerely,

(簽名)

Title:I.T Superior

Institution: The North Coast Partol Office of Taiwan Government Institution

Address: No. 31, Lunping Village, Zhongai Rd., Taoyuan,Taiwan 328, R.O.C

Phone:(886)9xxxxxx

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    我等級不夠, 無法變色標示, 你閱讀起來會比較辛苦,

    我盡量標示, 希望你看得懂~

    To Whom it May Concern:

    I am (我會加an) I.T Superior(S我會改成小寫) of Information department (of Information department 感覺是贅詞耶...IT不就是資訊部門了?). This department charge(我會加s) affairs regarding establishing a network management system for the purpose of achieving the goal of digitalization on remote control, maintenance, training, and relevant logistic automation.

    Cheng-Wei Wu is a staff in this department. (H大寫)he had worked for The North Coast Partol Office of Taiwan Government Institution from November 2005 to November 2006. When he worked in The North Coast Partol Office.Cheng-Wei Wu has showing an outstanding for(我會刪掉for) performance in our Information Department.His corresponding duties are shown as follows: Maintaing Work Flow System,Building The North Coast Patrol Office Communication-Equipment Management Information System,Introducing .NET and Framework establishing North Coast Patrol Office Systems, Maintaining The North Coast Patrol Office Video Conference System,Deployment(既然前面都是ING, 這我會改成developing) and monitoring of active network gears.

    Cheng-Wei Wu has excellent communication skills. In addition, he is extremely organized, reliable and computer literate. Cheng-Wei Wu can work independently and is able to follow through to ensure that the job gets done. He is flexible and willing to work on any project that is assigned to his.

    Cheng-Wei Wu has my highest recommendation.

    I highly recommend Cheng-Wei Wu as a candidate for you.

    Sincerely,

    (簽名)

    Title:I.T Superior

    Institution: The North Coast Partol Office of Taiwan Government Institution

    Address: No. 31, Lunping Village, Zhongai Rd., Taoyuan,Taiwan 328, R.O.C

    Phone:(886)9xxxxxx

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  • 1 0 年前

    先不管語句對不對. 有多處時態不對. 例如. Cheng-Wei Wu is a staff .... 因為現在已經離職, 所以 is 應該改成 was. 另外, Cheng-Wei Wu has showing an outstanding for performance in our Information Department. 其中 has showing 要改 (an outstanding for performance 也要改, 不過不是時態問題.) 還有其他一些看就知道的時態錯誤, 版主應可以自己找出來. 不多說了.

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